The World Inside of You - Comments

Please update soon! i'm looking forward to it. <3
-Alex

loved the update

Thanks for updating :)

The banner is way too cute! I have never read an m-preg before and I didn't know what to expect while reading this, I really like it though. The story sounds very interesting so far and I can't wait to read more. I'm subscribing to this :)

I like it...it's different than any other m-preg's I've read before. Thanks for the recommendation!

=/ it started off cute, but got depressing toward the end, but it was still an awesome chapter!

The banner is cute! I love this idea! It's unique =)

that was really sad, but i loved the chapter and can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Wooooo!!

that really sucks, he doesn't need this kind of stress right now =/ loved the chapter though!

you really should update this! it's amazing!

oh la la interesting!!!! update like asap

I've never understood mpreg stories. They never made sense to me so I never really bothered to read them. It still doesn't make sense to me but the way you wrote it was nice. I thought it was cute, and I felt bad for him, for some reason I was completely reminded of my best friend Nick. He's just broken up with this boy who was in a relationship and bleh, anywho. On to the actual comment. Cute plotline, it's very different from what you normally read on here. Great job.

^what a useless comment ahaha

No, I really liked this. Needless to say, I'm subscribing :) there were a couple of little errors, they just looked mostly like funny little auto-correct mistakes and a couple small grammar issues, but that's nothing a pre-post proofread can't fix.

I really enjoyed this! It's sort of sweet, even though it rings serious. Please do update!

Awww

Oh, I love this!!! It's a very original idea. I hope it's the professors baby as well. The Parker guy sounds like a real asshole.
I can't wait to read more.

i love this!!

Yay, I love mpreg. Great start. I love it already.

The banner is really adorable and so is the layout. The summary was really simple but it seems to be just enough to get people interested in the story, the story sounds like it's going to be very sweet while also being very interesting. Although I did have to read the second sentence a couple times over to kind of get what you meant by that one, but that's probably just me being easily confused again. There's not much else to say for the comment other than good luck on the story, it sounds like it could get to be a very interesting one.

I like the layout a lot! That banner is adorable; every girl's (or guy's this AU!) to go through pregnancy with their best friend.

Together they cradle there babies until birth, a world inside of them. <---'there' should be 'their'.

I like the idea of this, the fact that one of them is gay, one straight, on married, one unmarried, one male and one female. The way you could contrast those two experiences is really awesome, and I really look forward to seeing what you do with it. Great start!