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  • xXxMarchOfTheDeadxXx

    xXxMarchOfTheDeadxXx (100)

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    thanks, fixed it, I was typing too fast again... Thanks for telling me, and subscribing : ].
    January 25th, 2012 at 10:50pm
  • Marissa.Motionless

    Marissa.Motionless (100)

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    Not bad but you switched POV and said 'I' a couple times. I'll subscribe to it
    January 25th, 2012 at 10:43pm
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