January 27th, 2012 at 04:52am
Ahh this is adorable! I really don't know who this is about, but he's cute judging by the gif :3 Also, I love when layouts have gifs as the banner, I think they look so cool xD
Anywho, your writing was absolutely fantastic as well. The entire thing is so lighthearted and sweet and just made me smile reading it. I especially liked how they spoke in the foreign language (German?) and the way you italicized the translation. It always bothers me when people have awkward translations in stories, but the way you did it was great. It's the little things that make stories good<3 This was really, really great! Good job(:
Firstly I just gotta say that the gif of that guy is really cute, I don't know who he is but he's quite adorable. The lyrics to Crazier gave me a little insight into your story which I assume is a fluff of some sort.
The way you started this was just so sweet, I loved the interaction between the two and the cutesy dialogue. It made me feel all fuzzy and warm inside, it was nice <3 I liked the touch of adding Danish into the story, the translations were just so adorable. As a whole, the story was really well-written and it brought a smile to my face just reading it. It makes me wish that when I'm older I have a love like these two do. I can't really find any faults, it was perfect :)