Take Control - Comments

Is there any hope of an update soon? :)

Allie needs to go away! Please update(: I'm dying.

ALLIE NEEDS TO GO!!

Allie's niceness has to be a front. I mean, maybe it's not, but I just really think it is. And poor Oli. Now he's got to apologize to Mallorie. And I loved that all the boys were concerned, even if they didn't put it so nicely. Hahaa.

Ugh Allie go away.

eeeee.

I just got through reading all eleven chapters of this and I'm hooked now. Hahaa. I really love both Oliver's and Mallorie's characters. I'm trying to think of everything I had to say when I was reading, but my mind's gone blank. Lol. I loved that, although it's sad and heartbreaking, he had a significant reason for not wanting to go into a relationship again after Allie. I'm just kind of ... nervous, now that she's back. I can't see her bringing anything good to the story. Anyways, I'm really in love with this and can't wait for more! :)

I really really love this! Keep going! :p

:O holyy canoli!!!
ohh gosh he better not fall in "love" with the druggie again!
i will cry! do u want me to cry!
i think you do... ahaha jk
but jeezus now im really loveing this story! <3
update soon!
really really really soon! :D

Dang it! I so called this!

I love love love this, can't wait for more.

wait...what happened to part 10 ? O.o

lol yeaa! i say that everytime someone acts all clingy and stalker status....i mean ask questions but we arent playing 20 questions! or ppl who u think follow you! lolzzz
annd i want a guy to send me flowerrsss! :(
ohh the love life i wish i had! ahaha
but he needs to just be wiith her!
ooooo he should write a song for her!!!!
awwwwwww that would be soo adorable lolzz
loved this tho!
update soonn girly! :)

Oli makes me so mad haha. Get with her already!

<3 I love this story. You are such a talented writer. At first I was like why are there spelling mistakes when some people talk? It got so annoying. Then I remembered.. British accents. xD

i kinda love protective boyfriends...but not like 'level five clinger' protective...
anyways, this was kinda sad but really adorable.
they should just both admit to loving each other...makes life sooo much easier
but then we would have no story...
ooo thats hard...do i want them to admit it to each other...or still have a story to read..
thinky mode!
aha
update soon!
i waited to long for this chapter! :p
jkjk ;)

oh myyyyyy more updates PLEASE this is perfect

ugh.. boys.

Omfg its been waaaay too long since I've commented or even had a chance to read stories on here! So much has happened! Meeep. Omg.
But yeah, MAN THE FUCK UP OLI! (freak out moment over) Tom is adorable tho <3

aaah! more updates please! I'm really excited about this story!