uh-oh so Val left... poor teddybear <3 heheh johnny the little gnome, so cuuuute! and jimbo acting like a vampire ahaha :P dawn staying with brian, don't see how that is a good thing though, like johnny.. :D
You write about certain things that i really dislike, but the way you write them it's seriously good. I even forget that you're using real-life characters, the story is great, i love it, i get so into it, keep the amazing writing. (hope my english made sense to you xD)
OH MY GOD. I just stumbled on this story two days ago, and my busy schedule intervened making it take two days to read all of the 36 chapters so far. But WOW. This story leaves me speechless. You are only fourteen years old, I am almost twenty, and your writing is so mature for your age. It blew me away. I don't even have nails after biting them throughout this entire story. You wrote this so great and detailed, I loved every second. This is by far one of my favorite new stories. I am kind of sad there won't be a sequel, because it's so damn good, but there are only 9 chapters left and I cannot wait to see what happens next! I wish you could update every day so I won't be kept on edge! I salute you on this amazing masterpiece, and I can't wait to see how it ends! :)
Oh thats so fucking sad!! I don't ever get emotional over a story and i never understood how people do but.... My eyes just teared up at the end there. That was just.... Poor Matt. Well, at least i know it's gonna end up being a very interesting next chapter. And thank god Brian remembers Jimmy! Can't wait for the next update! :D
Damn Matt was hella pissed!! I can't believe Brian don't remember anyone but Sage, I hope Jimmy helps him remember. :'( I don't want Val and Matt to break up, Zacky's right about that!!
hahah awe man he don't remember zacky or dawn.. aaaand she had the chance to get a new start, with brian not going after her, but she totally just ruined that.. lol :D hmm, wonder if jim-jam can help with the memory-loss :P
it damn sucks that the server crashed! I've lost so much history, so many updates, friends and subscriptions. Thank god i came to check this one out immediately though! This was one hell of an amazing update! Someone should show him some photo's or something damn it! And i agree with Zacky, he can't not remember Jimmy! It'd be impossible, but if he did, i can imagine Jimmy being quite hurt lol. I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for the next update! (If mibba's server doesn't crash AGAIN) *Re-Subscribes* *Goes back to doing psychology coursework*
I didn't see this coming, at all. Bit I...freakin' love it! Omg. Your mind's brilliant. I just have a feeling Zacky is gonna find out about Brian and Dawn in a bit. :|
Wow.. I like this its better the Dawn and Brian sleeping together, its still not to good that Zacky and her are sleeping together cuz she's 16 but watever works i guess..
and matt.. poor baby <3