Broken Smiles - Comments

Oh God :/ not luke! Grrrr
I need more of this! <3

Always ending before the good shit happens all the time. Really good so far love it. Update. ASAP. Soon. Please. Thanks.

OMG wtf mia why didn't you ask Will for help sheesh lol great update can't wait for the next chapter :D

I'm so happy you finally updated! I wish Mia didn't have to accept money from Luke because then her relationship with him will only be more complicated. More Mr. Rhodes please!

Lots of ups and downs, huh? Exhilarating. I don't like Luke one bit, can't wait for more!

Nooo! Fuck Luke!

Mia? Are you serious girl? WHY CALL LUKE??? WHY!!!!!!!!!!!

This story rocks I again feel the need to stress the point of I CAN"T WAIT for the next chapter this is a real big cliff hanger thanks for the entertainment will check in again :D

THE FIRST KISS i love it

OMG this story is great i can't wait for your next update thank you for takeing time out of your day to entertain my bored ass you rock

Ok I love this story and I just started reading :) Update Again please

I am subscribing!!

OMG, YOU UPDATED!!!! THANK GOD, I THOUGHT YOU DIED D:. SERIOUSLY! Happy birthday, though! Update soon!!!! <3

I freaking love this story! Post more super soon!

You can't leave it there! That is so not fair haha, please update again soon I really love this :)

YAY! a new update! please update soon!! cant wait to read what happens next..!! :)

So mibba only let me read until chapter four... Now it let me read past it
And OH MY GOD they kissed
Can't wait for more <3

I wish she would of told him
Can't wait for more <3

Holy fudge monkey's !!!!! THEY KISSED!!!! *dies of its perfection*
XD Update soon please !!! :)

omg. finally they kiss! this is a really good story. you should update very soon.. lol