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  • shortygirl

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    Found you polyvore wanted to check out your stories.this very good. I thought I had a dirty mind ;)..
    July 20th, 2012 at 10:44pm
  • shadowek

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    sequel pls!!!!
    June 5th, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • inwonderland.

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    So yeah there goes my ovaries. ;D am I the only one who's thinking story or a sequel. Cause damn! :D
    April 29th, 2012 at 09:27am
  • c i e l o.

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    O_O Holy damn fuck, your smut is MIND-BLOWING. I've never seen this idea before, oh my I just love it. That was so HOT, Johnny got to me the most, now I think I'm going to get in touch with fantasies because of this xD

    LOVE LOVE!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 10:12am
  • pat semetary;

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    Wow :) this was HOT. I love me some Avenged smut and there are a lot of overused prompts out there but this definitely isn't one of them! I love the whole gang-banging thing, and how you put Arin in the corner wasn't how I was expecting. Overall, this was an amazing oneshot and I definitely wouldn't mind a sequel! :D
    March 27th, 2012 at 04:36am
  • bloodravyn

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    i sooo need a cold shower now!!!
    March 18th, 2012 at 10:16am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    That was well written. Not to be mean, but I did notice some mistakes. Barely noticeable, but since I'm a stickler and all, I picked em out. Just some missing words here and there is all. Other than that, wow.
    March 14th, 2012 at 07:32am
  • Dizasterpiece

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    Wow that was hot!! ;)
    March 13th, 2012 at 02:32am
  • crazyGirl6

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    Wow... That way really hot ;) lol I would like to check out other stories of yours but you have a privet profile... Can I please see the other stories you have?
    I really loved how you wrote this. :) amazing
    March 11th, 2012 at 04:29pm
  • MochaXtacy

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    omg you smutty girl you!!!
    i absolutely loved it!
    you should come out with another one shot for it
    but hot diggity damn!
    March 11th, 2012 at 07:57am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Oh my God. Holy shit woman this is insanely hot. This is definitely the best smut I've read and I loved how original you were with the prompt. I would've never thought of the teachers/student idea. It was so fantastically amazing that I can't even describe it! Loved loved loved this! You deserve some sort of award! Great job! :D
    March 11th, 2012 at 06:38am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Holy crap. I'm pretty much speechless. That was so hot, to say the least. Great job.
    March 11th, 2012 at 06:25am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    say yes*
    March 11th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Two questions; 1.) When is the sequel going to be written? {If you weren't planning a sequel then plan again.} 2.) Do you take requests for one-shots? {Please dear god I'm begging you to say yesterday.}
    That hands the HOTTEST smug I've ever read
    Bonus points for including {especially Johnny cause he doesn't always get the love he deserves.}
    Thank so much for you entering this

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    March 11th, 2012 at 05:29am
  • Pandakupikake

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    wow..um...uh...good job...... xD
    March 11th, 2012 at 05:06am
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