Alright, just to put this out there: I have never been able to get into Naruto. However, this one-shot is wondrous! I didn't know it was Naruto until much later on, and I loved every minute of it. Your writing is fantastic. (And I'm terrified of needles, so the first line definitely caught my attention. Yuck.)
Thank you so much for the comment! and im glad you looked up Naruto because I know most would have either just left the story or just didn't care about the importance of them :)
So I had no ideawho naruto was so I researched alittle so I could understand the story more. It gave me chills to say the least, every single line I got shivers down my spine. I felt like I was living this story- and lets be honest not a lot of writer can do that to people! Definitley very interesting, capturing I loved it.
Got this from comment swap, I'm not a fan of Naruto for the first thing, although I do love this one-shot. The fact that where it was set in and how it progressed really made me interested in it and it's different to other fan fictions. You should make this into a further story.
Alright, just to put this out there: I have never been able to get into Naruto. However, this one-shot is wondrous! I didn't know it was Naruto until much later on, and I loved every minute of it. Your writing is fantastic. (And I'm terrified of needles, so the first line definitely caught my attention. Yuck.)