i'm so excited for this!!!! before reading the note at the bottom, i could instantly see the 10 Things connection :) i'm super excited to see where you take this story! keep it up :)
Wow, this is really intriguing so far. I'm so curious to find out this secret that John's keeping from Charlotte, or perhaps he's just telling her that he doesn't love her or something? I love the way you've built up the story, and it just makes me want to know even more what's going to happen in this story. There are no spelling/grammar mistakes from what I can see, and I like the simplicity of the layout. I know this is a fan fiction but I'm going to read it like an original, which I love because I hate reading fan fics where you have to know the fandom before reading. I love this so far, and I can't wait to see where you take this!