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I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!

Nice update! C: I agree with shadow14, if nothing bad happened to those mofos then I would've ripped my hair out. I'm so glad Corrie and Aaron have finally been reunited. Poor Corrie, seems all the shit happens to her... :(

Fuck yeah haha I laughed reading the damage Aaron did to Craven. If those officers put Aaron in prison everything Alec said would happen. But I don't think he's going to prison, it really was self-defense. And if they can't realize that then they're effing dumb.

Update again soon!!

Great story man, keep up the good work.

I won't lie, this made me cry. <3
I'm so glad Corrie's alive!

Holy crap!!! I love this!!! (except for what happened to Corrie and all that) I fucking LOVE it when Aaron kicked that motherfucker's ass. That was AMAZING!!!!!!
I'm curious to see what the guys have to say, esspecially after leaving them behind.

At least they heard from Corrie. But I want to know who the fuck took her all the way to Georgia! I want to know what's going on. By the way, I love this twist. I'm definately interested as to what's going on now, not that I wasn't before cuz I was, I just love action. So I hope that Aaron gets there and finds whoever it was that took Corrie so he can kick his ass.

Corrieee. :'(
Please don't kill her off.</3

ARE YOU SERIOUS?!?! I hate you. -___-
Just kidding. I don't hate you. But PLEASE update soon?!

WHere is she? !

WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED TO CORRIE?!?!?!

I really want to know what happened! Update soon!

I really like Alec's P.O.V. I'm glad he finally came out of the closet. And the way he came out was a bit surprising for me. I wasn't expecting him to kiss Quin like that. But it was pretty amusing. Now I'm kind of curious to see what Jake thought of all that, like Alec. I like how the twins throw the paper around the classroom writing insults on that paper.

I really loved the first chapter. I thought it was great and I couldn't imagine what I would do if I was driving and that happened. I liked how you set it up for us to think the main character was the suicidal one at first. I like Corrie so far though.

I like the shirts Corrie got Aaron. The Hangover is awesome! so I can see how it'd be one of Aaron's favorite movies.
I kind of like the chapter in Jake's P.O.V. It's different. and it definately shows how others see Aaron and Corrie. I didn't really peg Jake to be the type to like Corrie, I figured he only went for sluts, like Lorrie. But that definately shows just how often he thinks about sex.

I like how Alec is coming out of the closet. Him and Quinn seem to be good with each other. I hope Aaron and Jake work things out soon.

It took me a bit to realize that Cedric and Edward are the same guy. I was watching it saying I've seen him before then I watched the Goblet of Fire afterwards and was like Holy shit that's Edward.

This story<3... Okay I just like sat for like forever reading the entire story and then the comments... This thing made me laugh, cry, and just get totally shocked out of my mind .... My favorite parts were: when Ashton is explaining his age to Aaron (lmfaoo) , right at the beginning when Aaron thinks there might be cocaine in corrie's coffee coz she's so happy, the "hidey hole", and all the songs corrie sings. I cried when ashton was in hospital.... And was shocked beyond words when I read about Aaron's mum, and when I found out Alec was gay... Noooooo, he was mine=(
Jake makes me laugh =D I kinda think he and lorrie make a cute couple....
You're an amazing writer .... And sorry for the long-ass comment =)

Sounds like an awesome first day haha I think it's funny how Aaron is always stuck with Jake. I got a kick out of Alec and Ash in the lunch line screaming and shit at each other. But what I really like is the last two paragraphs, '"I'm Aaron and I'm in love with Corrie." Corrie blushes scarlet. "I'm Corrie and I'm in love with Aaron." and then they kiss despite being in class and stuff. That's really cute, sweet, and adorable.

I guess that that isn't the worst start to being back at school.

Ahh! I KNEW it!!! xD
Can't wait for the next chapter!(: