aw, i enjoyed reading this story so much and i'm sad to see it go. :[ but it was good while it lasted, great story! can't wait for your next, i have to catch up on reading the red riding hood story right now actually.
Girl, you lucky I read that back to back [in order] because if I only saw that one update?! Wow. FIREWORKS. Lol, great ending! I loved the Romeo and Juliet theme [with more common sense, Matt didn't pull the trigger and then go, "Oh my bad, I messed up big time."] to it. But uhhh...good thing he didn't die. Syn in charge? That woulda been GREAT. Another great story by the Queen!
I hate you...and I don't think I've ever said a bigger lie! haha I'm totally kidding. that was amazing. I'm really really really gonna miss this story but the ending was fantastic. and you did such a great job with the suspence and everything. I really thought they were all dead! It made me cry. no joke. but I'm really glad you didn't kill them and the whole thing with one of the kids being named Tommy was adorable. ANYWAYS!!! haha I'm excited to start reading your other story but if this one was amazing that one will prolly be even better. feeeeeeeeeel the pressure! haha Have an amazing day! lol
I started to freak out when Matt showed up again. Like for reals. but I'm ok now lol. I'm glad that you're doing good and I really can't wait to see what happens with red and the rest of your writing :D
NOOO If it weren't for this candy in my system I would be bawling right now. Of course short shit kept his word or I'll kick his ass...evil person you lol I shortened my no because it looked wrong when the comment uploaded but be assured it was long! lmfao
who got shot? who who who....ok now I sound like an owl....but seriously I guess it doesn't matter who died because either way, I'll be sad...unless Michael somehow was the one killed. in that case, yay. but from all your evil grinning, I'm taking that as a no. that chapter needs to come out NOW..ok well not actually because I'm going to bed cause I'm exhausted and I have to get up early tomorrow...so ya know. by tomorrow night is good! haha but the sooner the better!