Omg. First of all where is Niall?!?!! Did he die omg if he did I think I'm going to cry.... Btw I love this story soaosowooaoaossosososoososos much. Please continue!
Ello :D I'm sorry I'm only giving you feedback as of now. I was busy with school and basketball. But that's besides the point. EMILY! I LOVE YOUR STORY. It's so cute and great and awwwh. :3
This is so good, Angel Pie. You've matured so much as a writer. It's hard to believe it was a year ago was when we began writing FanFiction. I'm so glad I can call you my best friend <3
Honestly, I already love this story. It reminds me of the Notebook, which is one of my favorite movies. The second chapter had me kinda iffy on continuing in the beginning, 'cause I'm impatient and I was like "Whoa, where are the boys?" But I'm glad I continued to read it, because the second half had me smiling the whole time! I'm definitely subscribing. :)