I love this, oh so very much. Its so simple and sweet, I really get into it. I'm so glad you plan to update frequently, I love it so much and hate waiting :3
awesome :) I love how he denies being whipped but does say he loves her. That's really cute :) And I really like how he kisses her on the cheek instead of on the lips on their first date :) Great job again! Hoorah for more frequent updates!
I stumbled upon this story, I debate whether or not I should read it, and I must say I'm glad I decided to read it. I love the way you're writing this story, it's not often when you read a story that is telling a story about the past, don't know if that made any sense, but I love it. Can't wait to see what else is ahead. :D
You're very welcome, so delicately. :D I really liked the last line. Such a great and delicate touch too. I love how he's all like "The carriage is a long shot. Dinner maybe" or something to that effect. It's just great :) I really hope you keep going!
First, great layout. I love the picture/banner/thingy. It's really awesome and stellar :D
Second, I love the pictures you used for Aiden and the girl (who's name I forgot...I'm so pathetic). Anyway, the girl is super adorable and I can totally see her being from Texas.
Third, as for the opening, being new at a really big school is totally normal and I completely understand her feelings. Also, how she reacts with Aiden is super stellar :D I love it! Anyway, look forward to seeing what you have in story :)
P.S. The summary in the beginning, is really amazing and stellar :) I love it! It's very mysterious!