Ok, I just read chapter one. I'm going to give an honest comment :P So, I really do the like the story line so far. I am really interested in this situation and I love how you bring in a little information about the past that foreshadows the change that's to come in the future. I also like the Allusions you bring in because I really do connect with Green Day and the Wembley Stadium ^.^ However, I know very little about any of the characters. Right now... they're very flat characters and I can't tell them apart. You do say this is only an introduction though. This is the first story that I'm going to keep reading :P Wonderful job.
June 19th, 2012 at 12:12am
