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  • Myche

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    oooooh loved it
    May 23rd, 2007 at 12:05am
  • Unicorn.

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    o.O SCARE HIM xD
    May 22nd, 2007 at 04:26pm
  • suddenxsilence

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    gah!
    ryan's such a good kid'
    gotta love him .. or spencer
    whatever
    lol
    but great job on newby chaptah
    May 22nd, 2007 at 04:15pm
  • panicfan3-10

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    <3
    truly an amazing story!
    cute chapter!
    May 22nd, 2007 at 07:27am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    Love it! Update soon, please! Yay
    May 19th, 2007 at 03:41pm
  • surrealism

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    Wow

    oooo more soon
    its really great
    May 19th, 2007 at 02:13pm
  • Sasberry

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    OMFG!
    Can I stab Jimmy in the face?
    PRICK!

    Great update.
    Awk!
    Lil Ryan.

    x
    May 18th, 2007 at 08:16pm
  • Myche

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    woooow, omg its so gd
    May 18th, 2007 at 08:14pm
  • Fallenfrombelow

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    thanks, yay, i love new readers!
    i got my friend to send me a whole bunch of Panic! covers, i'm not sure what music program she used...i have that one Round Here, Karma Police, Slow Motion and This is Halloween...
    May 18th, 2007 at 06:50pm
  • surrealism

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    new reader
    wow what i've read so far is great
    can't wait to finish reading it up to date

    although i did want to know where you got that Panic! track from
    it made me cry i love it
    May 18th, 2007 at 06:18pm
  • Fallenfrombelow

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    i do believe that that would be my biggest compliment...
    i've never written a phone call shutting up piece before
    i'm glad you liked it
    May 18th, 2007 at 04:17am
  • suddenxsilence

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    oh my goodness
    that was some scary shit right there
    i told my phone call to shut up cause i was reading
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    wow
    i loved it
    amazing fantastic wonderful job
    May 18th, 2007 at 03:07am
  • panicfan3-10

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    i am speachless. That chapter was amazing! stupid freaking jimmy!
    May 18th, 2007 at 01:55am
  • Myche

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    oooh more sooon please
    May 17th, 2007 at 07:49pm
  • suddenxsilence

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    haha
    i can make room for jon at my place... lol
    woot can't wait to find out what is going to ahppen next
    and i'm going to try and get something here in the next fifteen minutes
    May 17th, 2007 at 04:20pm
  • Unicorn.

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    NOO. DON'T EAT JON!! *Me loves*
    May 17th, 2007 at 12:44pm
  • panicfan3-10

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    I am in love with your amazing story. You are a true genius with a keyboard! :D
    keep writing!
    ~A
    May 17th, 2007 at 07:08am
  • Fallenfrombelow

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    thanks, yay, good, i hate mary sues and hope they die
    i do believe i myself would die if izzye was one
    yeahhh...i kinda always do that...it's how i say it, def e ant ly...and so i spell it defiantly...sorry
    my english teachers never notice...it's kinda funny
    and next comment makes it 100!!!
    who shall it be??
    May 17th, 2007 at 07:01am
  • horsie890

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    I love how you've brought this tory to life. You've taken one (or two or three) usually cliché plot(s) and turned it into something beautiful and really well written. You've pretty much taken all Mary Sue characters out there and burned them to the ground. Excellent work.
    The ONE thing I noticed is that you spell 'definitely' like 'defiantly'. They have similar meanings, but they're different enough that it doesn't make sense.
    Sorry, that was my inner Grammar Nazi speaking. *whacks GN on head with flamethrower used to burn MSues*
    May 17th, 2007 at 06:24am
  • allison wonderland

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    I love this!!! Please update again tonight!!!
    May 17th, 2007 at 05:34am
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