Hearts Intact - Comments

whoa
alot of info there

wow that chapter was great!!!
that was so shocking
so much was exposed
i loved it
by the way i'm writing a story currently
i'm going to post my first chapter today
check it out if you get the chance

zOMG!!

Update soon!

I updated again, obviously...and the plot is finally going somewhere!
But I've gots to go to bed, i got school tomorrow...
And i'm going up to my dad's tomorrow, so that means no updates over the weekend
Sorry

i still thought it was very good
sounds like the interview from hell...
so turn in the plot soon or something??
can't wait to find out

thanks, i like that scene with ryan, it's one of my favorite parts
I just thought that I should warn you that the next chapter is going to suck really,
It's a filler chapter, so now i can get the plot moving again

yeah
haha
it's now almost three here
and i really liked the newest chapter
i thought you captured the essence of ryan well with him not wanting to scare her
good work

i didn't even think of the video when i wrote that part
hmm...you're right, i guess it is kind of like that,
and im glad you liked it
i'd update right now,
and i might
if i don't fall asleep at the computer,
it's 1:26 am here, and im dying, but i guess i will update...

great chapter by the way
loved it

i am telling you nikki
i really think that ryan and pete and possibly brendon are vampires
i am seeing a bit of a little less sixteen candles video forming in my head with these guys in the alley

rut roh!!
i still can't relate to some of the stubborness
i am a bit of a passive person
like to avoid any conflict

zAHH!
You have to post moree.

wow
heavy stuff
that was really great
loved it
can't wait for the next

haha
yeah i really like the element of how protective he is
it reminds me of my family as a whole
i'm pretty addicted to this now
the bird story made me laugh
i really want to know if their was really something in that room
i'm so currious

yeah
Skylar is kind of made after my own brother
he gets crazy like that
I dated this guy once, and my brother and my other "brother" threatened to kill him
And I quote, "I will take him out into the back alley and beat him with everything back there"
It's annoying
defiantly something budding
with the letter e in it
wow, i'm so unhelpful

I love this story!
Write more.

great chapter by the way

god over protective much
but i have a feeling something bad is going to happen here as she goes out into the darkness alone
vampires i think
and do i sense a budding love between ryan and izzye or just a budding friendship

of course you should post them. be proud of your work and show it off
this chapter was really funny
being thrown in a lake clothes and all sucks....
or a pool. or any body of water
i almost drowned once because i was sitting on a diving board in all my clothes and got pushed in
mind you i'm an excellent swimmer it just caught me off guard
so can't wait to see what happens next!

To be honest there won't be too much about tour life yet
I got so much incidents I got to put down first
But tour life is coming
Once the story slows down a bit
and thanks i was wondering what people would think of it
I wrote out all of the songs for the story
think I should post them?
I don't know if I should...