Brash and Reckless - Comments

I like the beginning a lot because John and Fisher are just little kids and you wrote them to be really cute aw! Generally, I like how you do character development and character revelation. In the beginning I was a bit confused though as to who Fisher was but I figured it out now ^^ I also like how you write dialogue!

You must update soon because I'm curious to know what happens next and I'm already in love with this.<3

Ohh, that's very good! I like your story a lot :3 I'm really bad at commenting things, so I'll leave it to that ;)

Hello, I am here from Comment Swap! I don't usually stray towards these types of stories, but quite frankly this was adorable. The first chapter made me smile a lot, it was so cute and arrggh. I love it. Your descriptions are gorgeous, although I wished they were more thorough, so I could have a clearer picture in my mind. The grammar and spelling is pretty good, there are a few mistakes but hey, we're all human. I think the only thing that bothered me was that there wasn't enough description. You're so amazing at it, so it would be awesome if there was more of it. Your layout and banner is so freaking gorgeous, oh ny god. Anyway, I loved this, it was brilliant and so cute. Recommended!

Okay, so I'll start with what I disliked: I only read the first few chapters, but there were a lot of spelling and grammar errors that really distracted me from the story. I also felt that the action took to long to begin, or in other words i didn't really understand the point of what I was reading. Maybe a more descriptive description would fix that.

That being said, your characters are well developed and quite charming, really. I did enjoy the childhood innocence of the first two chapter. I loved the layout as well. Overall, this is a good looking story. Well done!

Wahhh. You updated! I really really like Fisher. Like even though he's totally awkward with John right now, he makes me laugh. I'm curious as to how band practice is gonna go. (:

I can just imagine the two of them as little kids. I bet they were fricken adorable. Haha. I like the way you write, very practical when it comes to stories. I haven't read a lot of John O stories, but this looks great.

UPDATE FALLING IN REVERSE NOW. this was perfect <333

I'm in awe honestly. I like how when they were kids, fisher actually had child like fears, and that he could confide in John. But the one thing that still some what gets me is the lapse in what we know. But i'm sure you will get to that since you almsot did earlier. I really like what you've doen with the growing older of the characters. Nice job. like it a lot.

I would like to start by saying even though I know absolutely nothing about this fandom whatsoever, I adore this story.

The first chapter is the sweetest thing I have ever read, as is the second. They're positively delightful, showing a real childlike innocence. When most people have characters of that age, they tend to make it over exaggerated, or completely improbable. You managed to capture the essence of what a real childhood friendship is like.

I love how the characters aged, and the personality you managed to give them. It showed very good character development, which a lot of fanfics lack. Usually they just have boring, static characters. But this is something else. It's amazing, really.

Your writing style is unique, in the best of ways. And I honestly want to read more. Fantastic job :)

I think this is a really good story! I'm definitely excited to read more about this. I like how it starts out when they're little because it just gives more of an understanding. It's a very cute story and I4m glad I got to this through the commentswap! It was definitely worth reading! I like it, a lot!

The story is great! I love the point of view and the way you make the reader understand what Fisher is going through. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but other than that this is a very well written story. Great job!
~Mari

I'm glad comment swap brought me to this story as it brought you to mine earlier. Coincident? I think not haha. I think this has just the right amount of humor and drama and even more interesting twist coming with the more you write. And as for what she's going to where when she hangs out with Johnohh, you can't go wrong with slutty clothes. Just kidding though! Keep on keeping on.

I only read the first two chapters, and I must say I rather enjoyed them! It's nice to read something different as well! I like that this is in the point of view of children, and I think you did a great job writing it. John and Fisher are just too cute together...You just do such a great job of describing their childishness. Great job on this!

Your first chapter was really charming, a sweet introduction to the characters as children, from their first meeting. This is a refreshingly original opening for a story, one I haven't seen too often, and you do it well. The admiration Fisher shows for John is innocent and sincere, but it lays the foundation for what I can tell will be a deeper attraction as they mature. As an added bonus, you have a knack for descriptive language, and I love a writer who paints a picture. Very nice work!

This really isn't my fandom at all. So i know nothing about the real life people, but i did really enjoy the story. The first chapter was cute and adorable. I havent read the whole thing yet, but i might subscribe and read more :) good job.

So... Normally I wouldn't have started reading this, because it isn't my cup of tea, my fandom or whatever you want to call it. I thought the first chapter was really cute and got everything off pretty well. Seeing how they acted together as children and all that. Now I'm just curious about what happened with them. and I kind of like this love-hate relationship I detect between Sarah and Fisher. And I had to laugh so hard at the scene where Fisher says that she'll regret this when she's 40 and all alone. I'll definitely stick around for now :3

Yay another The Maine fiction which I know absolutely nothing about! Just kidding ;) Though I've gotten mostly these kind of FanFics from Comment Swap, and I've never heard of this band before. Anyways its cute that you decided to write out the first chapter with the characters as children instead of adults. And another thing I really got into was: This isn't a heterosexual fic! First one ever that I've read, and I enjoyed it very much.

I read a few chapters into the story.The story itself is really nice and the way you write as well..it just isn't a lot of my interest. I probably wouldn't have read three chapters if I would think this story is bad, so please don't think that's what I'm saying! It's a great story and I have to agree with one of the comments below, the layout is beautiful!

I really like this. It hooked me form the first chapter, your writing style is great!
The flashback at the start really set the scene and gave us some background information,I liked that.
Can't wait for the next update, it's a really good story. Keep it up =]