Brash and Reckless - Comments

First of all, I freaking LOVE John O'Callaghan. He is the nicest guy ever. I love your layout. I love your plot. I love your story all together.

Also, I think this is the first time I've gotten a Johno story via comment swap.

Your layout is absolutely stunning. I appreciate your taste for design, and I understand how difficult layouts can be, especially on the new layout maker, and I give you props for such a nice layout.
Starting the story in a flash back is risky, but you have managed to pull it off. Your writing styles accommodates me, and I enjoyed reading your story. Hope to see an update soon.

When I saw the title, I just assumed that this would be an All Time Low fan fiction. When I aw that it was John Ohh, I was absolutely ecstatic! You write all of your characters so well and I an really appreciative of the use of the 'character' page as it is nice to have an insight on who you are reading about! I noticed on your author's note for chapter five that you were doubting your writing... Please don't do that, it's fantastic! xx

I really like this. It's super detailed and the plot is interesting, unique and it most definitely makes readers hooked. I know I have :) I am quite a slow reader, but I really want to catch up.

I haven't found anything that I disliked about this story at all; all I can do is compliment this story in every way possible.

You have added another subscriber and another reader :D

Please update soon :)

I really enjoyed the portion of the sotry that I read. I think it's very well written, with very few, if any at all, grammar and spelling mistakes. I really like that because It's like my number one pet peeve in sotries! It's really interesting and it makes you want to read more. Very well done!

Love it! :)

I think this story is really well written. The plot is solid and I am loving the memories from the past when John and him were little. It's a very well balanced story and I felt myself being drawn into the story and feeling what the main character was feeling. I usually don't read slash stories but this one has a good beginning(: I also am really enjoying the comments him and his sister have with one another. It brings humor to the story and I think a touch of humor is perfect in any story! Definitely keep writing(: You have the skills for it(:

I like the story. The best line in the first chapter is "I think you need a tissue. Snots never look good on someones face." I could not stop laughing. I also liked how John's mom was like "Don't blame Fisher." haha! "I say a lot of things." Sarah rocks. Okay I am going to say that she rocks. She is one of my favorite charaters. Her and Fisher. lol! Keep going I am a huge slash fan and I am a huge John O'cCallaghan fan. :) Best of both worlds haha!!

I'm not really a fan of slash, but I enjoyed reading this; I think it is adorable. I'm just not very familiar with John, so I can't really say anthing on how he was portrayed. I also really liked your layout for this story! Overall I liked the story; keep up the good work!

I am not a fan of slash what so ever, but I am very glad i found this because it's co cute. I love Fisher, and Sarah, and especially the way John is portrayed. Your writing style flows very nicely, which makes me enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy the story.

Sarah and Fisher are so cute (: Such a sweet brother/sister relationship they have; almost too cute for words. Lol

Fisher seems way confused... Which, in turn, is confusing me! But it's not a bad thing. I like to be "on the edge of my seat" when I read a story. So this is good so far! In the first chapter there were a few grammatical errors, but as I continued to read they slowly disappeared. I enjoy reading this story (:

Tehehehe cute

Sorry I haven't been following the updates as I should have.

I love the sibling relationship you've built up for Fisher and Sarah.. it's perfect and very realistic. Your character development is great. The dialogue between the characters amuse the shit out of me.

I'm glad to know that John and Fisher are "reconnecting"... I wonder how they broke apart... I wonde. And I can already sense the growing attraction Fisher has for Johno.

Omg if it takes that long to update again I might am die omg.
So yeah, been subscribed for ages by I though I'd just tell you how awesome your story is. :D
Oh, and, UPDATE SOON OR I'LL DIE BECAUSE I AM NOT A PATIENT PERSON. Mmkay? :3

Oh boy I'm getting anxious as to what is going to happen
:)

WHY ARE YOU SO PERFECT?!

YOU TERRIBLE HUMAN BEING.
UPDATE THIS NOW.

When I saw this being updated I was like "let's give this a shot" and whoa now I'm addicted to one more story of yours. Well done <3

This is good <3 can't wait to read what happens next.
haha garrett, you nervous little boy ^-^
update soon!

Awwww poor Fisher...he seems so confused