Awesome! You really incorporated John and Fisher as young children with their ignorance and all that. Then the little fights that last like ten seconds, then ~make up~ You grasped onto the childhood innocence theme so well for the first two chapters.
LOL Halvo is a selfish attention seeker :) Love that. With John at a mature age, it'll turn to "Halvo is an attention whore"
But I absolutely adore how close Fisher is to Ross, instead of the common John and girl are best friends. It's a first that Ross is put into consideration, and even more than John :D
The only question i had was how old are they xD You answered it before i asked! :O You, you, YOU MIND READER! Meh... what an insult! :P
...why am i insulting you? God I make no sense
Those two are so adorable though That's exactly how kids are! It's great how you're portraying them
I remember the whole 'or i won't be your friend anymore' thing and all the pathetic two minute fallouts you have when you're younger :') Le memories
This story has so much promise! :P And i was wondering (another question) (probably a dumb one) Who's Halvo? :) I think he was mentioned in another one i was reading and i have no clue who he is lol
Fisher is already checking out John lol. Oh god. They are just too cute. Sprinklers xD This chapter I was basically going 'aww' the whole way through it. Update soon?
THEY'RE SO CUTE. OH MY GOD. SO CUTE SO CUTE. Oh little Fisher, checking out John. ;D ROSS YOU POO HEAD. UGH, I'M WITH JOHN. HE IS A BABY. LOL. Halvo being selfish. I just pictured him being a princess with a little tiara and everything. xD
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