This is really good. I really want to see if Colin and Ellis get back together because I think Ellis is better for him than the girl he's with in the story.
I'm a big fan of titles being used in the story. It always makes me pleased when they come up especially in dialogue like how you used it. Fun read, I really enjoyed it!
I really loved this. I think you did a really good job with the length as well as managing the story and characters. It wasn't drawn out or over done but instead gave a very clear simple explanation of a broken love story. The set up of their past was written clear enough to make show why it was so hard for both of them. Overall I love it :)