Bite My Tongue - Comments

I really liked it! <3

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Up until one little point. I don't have a problem *reading* about anal sex or traditional sex. However... I don't like the idea of going from anal to vaginal. No problem with vaginal to anal though. But anal to vaginal is a no go zone for me.

... Sorry just ignore me. I'm hoping to be a gynecologist one day so this is kind of a thing for me. It was still good though! :D

hot damn! matt is the perfect dom. saying sweet things but taking it hard and fast, unff.
you always write the best matt smutt, darn you *shakes fist*
well, perhaps one day we'll get to see the threesome? though matt is kinda protective of her, wonder how that'll go...hmmm! amazing job as always :D

I have a raging fucking boner.....and I dont even have a penis!
<33
Even though it was very erotic,it was still cute and sweet (:
I really wanna read the third of this (:
BRING ON THE ZACKY!<33

Def write that threesome, girl. Dom Matt is a beautiful thing.

FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! It was oozing with sexiness nd lust I was practically dying the chemistry between Kari nd Matt is fuckin ridiculous like thts the kind of couple people just wouldnt understand at all becuz they mesh sooo well tht it's impossible to see them apart......nd now they r goin to hav a baby omg fangirl status........I can't wait fr the threesome with Zacky god tht is goin to be soo hot my ovaries just can't take the sexiness of how hot tht threesome is goin to be especially since Kari never lets another man touch her but Matt nd the fact tht Matt is very protective of Kari nd only wants his hands on her body nd also Kari nd Zacky like each other before she got wit Matt lets just say its goin to rather competive in my opinion.......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

oh my gosh! i think im gunna need to change my panties after reading this! lol.
point blank i loved it :)

Loved it!

Wow
Damn
Holy Shit
Um...that was seriously one of the hottest one-shots I've read
I can't wait for the threesome with Zacky
Amazing wonderful job

:}

Fuck.
That was hot.
I can't even say anything else.

Aw man you used the gif I was gonna use but that's. Okay explains everything.

FUUUUUUUUUUCK!
That was so HOT!
I feel like I need a cold shower after that.
I think the ending was perfect and they should definitely accept it!
I hope you win, Kari!
And I, like Hachie, can't wait to read the Zacky one ;)

This is amazing!
The raw emotions that Kari and Matt show each other is just out of this world.
I know many girls including me are envious and wishing that we all could meet someone that we can trust like Kari does with Matt.
I loved the ending, the night that they made love, they created a baby unknownly.
I can't wait to read the next oneshot involving Zacky! X3
This is truly an amazing oneshot and I hope you win!