=o You should make a sequel for this!!!
July 30th, 2012 at 07:08pm
OH SNAP.
You had me at: The sweet, innocent boy he
stripped of any ability to love.
Honestly. I got the worst feeling possible in the
pit of my stomach when I realized Oli and him were
just 'friends' with benefits .__.
“Oliver’s my boyfriend.” = huge smile
“You’re telling us you’re a faggot?” = instant scowl
lawl. I'm getting really into this! c: So far, so good. XD
One of the best parts, I believe, is how it isn't rushed
out so quickly.
That's a big factor in what usually seems to kill a story
so quickly. This doesn't have that :D
You get brownie points for causing me to get very
upset with Oli. xD I have so much hate for that guy
right now.. >.>
The whole revenge plot makes me anxious o__o
OH NO. THE BRITISH ACCENT MAKES ME WEAK
IN THE KNEES. XD
“Well, no, but-“
My face: o:
“Yeah, fucker. I’m back. And I’m not letting
you go this time.”
My thoughts: OH NO. WHAT DOES THIS MEAN?!
DOES HE WANT HIM BACK?! OR IS HE GOING TO
GET REVENGE?! o.o
This story is just. Unf. Amazing. Words cannot even
begind to describe all of the emotions I felt.
<3
