1,000 Lies Told At 40,000 Feet High - Comments

  • SinfulGrly

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    just started reading this the other night and i cant wait for more!!! :D
    ~elly
    September 25th, 2012 at 08:56am
  • miss myself

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    Thanks everyone for your lovely comments, they inspire me to stay up late and write another chapter for you all tonight :)
    September 25th, 2012 at 05:31am
  • xXMissSerenaFreakXx

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    FUCK OSCAR GO CHACE! Yeah, that pretty much sums it up xD I really like the way you write ^^
    September 25th, 2012 at 04:04am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    love this!
    September 24th, 2012 at 05:38pm
  • lunalovely

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    Chace sounds like my kinda guy. A girl he sorta likes but is ''friend zoned'' is a dead giveaway that she is the one he sorta likes love it
    September 24th, 2012 at 04:10am
  • lunalovely

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    Chace sounds like my kinda guy. A girl he sorta likes but is ''friend zoned'' is a dead giveaway that she is the one he sorta likes love it
    September 24th, 2012 at 04:10am
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    Chace sounds like my kinda guy. A girl he sorta likes but is ''friend zoned'' is a dead giveaway that she is the one he sorta likes
    September 24th, 2012 at 04:10am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    lol Hate Oscar Love Chace ;)
    June 20th, 2012 at 08:55am
  • SomethingInTheWater

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    loved the update, it was great! Oscar is definitely NOT boyfriend material!! I lurrrve Chace!!
    June 17th, 2012 at 07:22am
  • Monroe;

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    I thought this was very sweet! I'm very like her in a way. I man if I had met someone on a plane like that I'd have definitly lied abotu who I was. I'm too socially awkward though to even have any further conversation xD
    Also, that blonde lady really irritated me to begin with. Ooh, she's so sterotpicaly blonde and grrr.

    You've got such a good plot going here. I think it's well developed. Your characters have all got unique and good potential personalitites. Their developing very well and workign well together. You've also got good plot development. You don't rush through anything, you pace it well. Your grammar is good too, and you've got good sentence structure and paragraphs.

    Overall very well written and much enjoyed! Awesome stuff!
    June 7th, 2012 at 01:37pm
  • SomethingInTheWater

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    this was so good! I can't believe Oscar didn't give her his jacket!? Isn't that like dating 101? he really needs to read the handbook! Anyway, I can't wait for more story and more Chace! Speaking of Chace, I think you accidentally wrote in his name at the beginning, in the first paragraph when you meant Oscar. here's the line: "Where Chace and I moving too fast? I mean....." ect. If it WAS supposed to say Chace, sorry my bad, and also, it doesn't really make sense..... anyway, I still liked seeing his name!!! :D
    June 4th, 2012 at 09:46am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    ............... WTF! I think Oskie is a JERKIE!!! and personally Chace is amazing and I want him to jump in during their date... but that probably wouldn't happen *nudge nudge.. PUSH!*
    June 4th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • hellobeautiful

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    I just read the first chapter, but I had to comment! I really love this character, Piper, even from just reading the first chapter. The way she created a new person, new history for herself every time she took the one hour trip to Sydney is very interesting. It sucks that dad doesn't spend that much time with her now. Keep writing and updating! I can't wait to see where this story goes. :)
    June 3rd, 2012 at 04:08pm
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    EEK! I loved it!
    May 20th, 2012 at 08:00am
  • hannahlovex3

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    please update! it would be a shame not to :(
    May 15th, 2012 at 11:53pm
  • SomethingInTheWater

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    I loved the update, even though it was short, it was still really good :) I don't think it's a date, because his mates are coming too, so I agree with Piper! Although, I think they'll still go off by themselves, and maybe he'll ask her out again (and it'll be a real date this time)! :D
    April 23rd, 2012 at 11:12am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    i like your story and i can't wait for more :) makes me SMILE every time I read it :)
    April 23rd, 2012 at 03:13am
  • WatchingGravity.

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    So, uh, update? :3

    I love this. you are a fantastic writer! Eveything is so simple and laid out, yet I did not expect your twist. Not to mention that your writing clearly conveys your voice, and it's easy to read.
    April 16th, 2012 at 12:26am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    Subscribed and commented. well worth the sleep deprivation hahahahaha update soon!! it's very good!
    April 2nd, 2012 at 09:33am
  • IceDeath.

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    Awesome story. Very cute. :D
    March 19th, 2012 at 02:16am