I really like this story so far!(: It's different and really interesting so far. I like where it's going and I can't wait for more of it.c: keep it up. :D
I love Chace! I like that he seems like one of those straight up no bs kind of guys, or maybe I'm just reading too much into a character... I really like his chemistry with Avery though
You are a great writer! I can tell from that one prologue that you're story will be interesting and good and use correct grammar and have a background that doesn't strain my eyes to read! keep going it sounds really good so far!!! Also I like the title