Love Marks - Comments

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So, admittedly- I know absolutely nothing about Big Time Rush (I know enough about the band- but the show was a complete mystery to me ) so I did a tiny bit of investigating- when I read they were (originally) hockey players, things made much more sense.

Your detail and the way you set the scene just blows me away. You write in a way that allows the reader to place themselves right into the scenario -every detail, every feeling, every touch- you do it in a way that is just perfect, and for that I will be forever impressed.

Kendall and Jo are clearly two very different people- but they way they mesh just works. I love they way we know what they're feeling- so many writers tend to neglect a character in a "multiple" type situation.

Your sex scenes are flawless. Really. They are among the best I have ever read.

I could really go on and on about this piece.

Thanks so much for entering, and good luck!

im really glad comment swap brought me here! i love this pairing and i really like how you m,ake lucy and jo so different from each other (especially during the sex). I love Kedall and he is my avorite one out of the bunch hehehe :) I hope you keep writing!! :)

This has got to be the best I've read. Of course, I adore this pairing nearly as much as you do and I think this might be the first story about them that I read, maybe the first one on mibba. Well, anyways I especially love how the contrast between Jo and Lucy is shown here in the form of sex (also the bit in the beginning, before the sex). At first the atmosphere seems pretty chilled out, tensed casualty, like how a person would feel if someone who intimidates them invites them over for drinks/hang out. I was smilng and nodding, enjoying the feeling your writing has brought in me. Then I think I understand Lucy as a character more now because of the way you voiced out her aura. I don't really think the show expresses her character as much as you did and I learned a lot about Lucy just from reading this.
Your sex scenes are amazing, as they always are. & the competitive, teasing tint to Lucy amazes me. It is so Lucy, ya know? I don't expect her to be this delicate one, letting Kendall be dominant over her; which I find Jo to be (as I was saying about the character contrast). Through their sexual relationship, I get a better feel of how different the two girls are, and Kendall, it feels nice to know that he actually likes a dominant, confident attitude in a girl.

This is amazing and thank you so, so, so, so much for writing it :D