Our Minor Mistake - Comments

  • Mrs.Robert.Sheehan

    Mrs.Robert.Sheehan (100)

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    *sigh* Okay, I don't have a rebellious characters in every story. I have no idea what you mean by the term applesauce I'm afraid.
    December 15th, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • leprechaun_katt

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    This story is a little apple sauce, you need to do some research about pregnancies and babies before writing a story like this, and you don't have to make a rebellious character in every story you do who drinks all the time.
    December 15th, 2012 at 05:34pm
  • ryan.berch

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    So my is a chatiolic the she believes that no sex untill maried and absouly no protection but ohter than theat this story os amazing!!!
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:03pm
  • sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb

    sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb (100)

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    i like this, but just so you know, you can't tell the sex of the baby until you're at least five months and even then it's rather difficult. cute story though :)
    July 27th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • XxBitterXCherryxX

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    Wow, she is a really un thankful daughter. I love the story though <3
    July 25th, 2012 at 01:05am