Pieces Of Me - Comments

I think you should make a sequel to this, like a short story or something :))

ZACKY YOU ASSHOLE! Also LOTTIE DON'T LEAVE HIM HE DESERVES A SECOND CHANCE! This was so good!

Wow that was just heartbreaking...
Stupid Zacky for being so mean!
I loved it though :D

this was soooooooo good.
i'm mad at zacky though.
you should totally make this into a full length story i wanna know what happens!

Zacky is such a jerk. I honestly can't believe him. I'm glad she let him have it and left him. Loved this though!

Gahhhhh. I love this and you. I cried a little. Zacky, you douchebag. I hats your pudgy sedge asst right now. -_-

Much much better! I'm glad you took our considerations in when writing. Not that the other one wasn't amazing, but this is much more realistic. And it's cool to read something that isn't cliche and all rainbows and happy endings. If possible, I'm even more angry at Zacky now lol. This is why you never have nude photos. Doesn't matter if you're famous or not, they WILL end up being plastered all over the place somehow; it's like a rule of the universe lol.

This is a great little piece. Very emotional while at the same time not overly melodramatic. It's a great balance. Well done.

Well even if this was edited/altered a little bit it was still amazing!!!! I loved it! And like before I'm mad at zacky for doing what he did to her!!!!x/ lol