When the White Light Splits - Comments

Oh my gosh, you leave all these cliffhangers and I always get excited for the next chapter to the point where I feel the need to fucking blast music or ride a horse. Your story is amazing. People need to read it.

Yaaay, every update of yours makes me smile so much. I love your story with a passion. :}

Chapter four is completely blank . . . Don't know if that was intentional but

Oh oh OH, damn you cliff hangers. I cannot even express my excitement. I love how you're leading all this up to something. :D

Oh my gosh I totally grinned like a fool at the "look alive sunshine" part. That phrase has always been my favorite. You've got me really excited now. I cannot wait for the killjoys to come in. This is going to be awesome.

Oh, and you're welcome. :}

I agree with shirtless I love the plot so far

Oh my gosh, shy doesn't this have as many stars as it should? This is absolutely amazing. It's a Killjoy story that's actually well written with a plot that will go somewhere. I'm definitely subscribing. You have ace writing skills.

I loved the first chapter simply because I loved the world you thrust the reader into. It kind of reminds me of a weird spin-off of some Nazi land, except not as violent. More like some sort of segregation. I actually felt bad and uncomfortable for Venya's current living conditions. God, that must suck.

I really can't wait for the next chapter. :)