The Forever Boys. - Comments

Dear author, you weren't the only one crying...the readers are crying too. Brownie points for that. I just loved everything about this from the plot to dialogues, descriptions...just everything. <3 You did a pretty good job writing this, so well done. XD That's all, bye from me. XD

Dear author, you weren't the only one crying...the readers are crying too. Brownie points for that. I just loved everything about this from the plot to dialogues, descriptions...just everything. <3 You did a pretty good job writing this, so well done. XD That's all, bye from me. XD

This is very well written, I love the way that you descibe even the little things, like the seat that Garrett was sitting in the Denny's. I reall have come to fall in love with the way that you string words together. It's amazing. Overall, this was a good read!
So keep it up, you've got a real talent here!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

Omg what are emotions now :'( really beautiful and moving loved it <3

I cried while reading this.....it's so beautiful.

Oh my god. This made me cry like a baby. It was so beautiful, you are an amazing writer.

I've never read anything to do with The Maine, I'd never even heard of them until I read this for the competition you entered it in.
But honestly? I couldn't finish this.
I couldn't finish it straight away because i was crying to hard and couldn't see the words.
When I did though, this is just such a beautiful, emotional and lovely story.
You have a serious talent for emotional writing and you should be really proud of your skills because not a lot of people can do it, and do it so damn well.
This was gorgeous.
Thank you for writing it, but damn you for making me cry so much haha.
I shall cuddle my pillow and cry some more.
Perfect.

I NEVER GET EMOTIONAL. ugh I'm crying. whhhhhhhy ;~;

this time i read it while listening to the song and its so much worse that way! the amount of tears in my eyes seriously i cry by the time he gets the call from the hospital :'(

Woah. That really shook my emotions, man.

OmgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgOMG.
I'm crying floods right now. And listening to that song while resding it just made it like a bajillion times more effective and heartbreaking and ahhh. Literally, just floods from my eyes. Floods.
Ahhh. So cute but heartbreaking and ahhh.
It was like, crying but smilin because the heartbreakingness was so cute and sweet but upsettig and i look insane with the tears. Omg. So sad. </3

Oh my god! I cried! So beautiful<3 Keep it up:)!<3

Oh god, I cried so much at this, I've managed to compose myself enough to write you a comment to tell you how beautiful this is to read...and I've never heard that song before either, but having it in my head added to the beautifulness, thank you :)

GOD THIS IS SO SAD!!!! :'(
I'm like crying now
even war horses didnt make me cry :'(

Oh my gosh, that's so sad :( The very last line l from John, ugh my heart it just broke.

Oh my gosh; this story is so moving it brought me to tears. I'm supposed to be going to the mall with my friend so now I have to run to her house crying. But besides that I love so so so much !

SO MANY TEARS. D: I absolutely love Parachute, and "Forever And Always" always has me in tears. This story had me bawling like a fucking baby. WHY MUST YOU BE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL WRITER OMG <3

So, I'm on my phone reading this, and it doesn't let me go to see what song is linked.. So I go into this having no clue until I see what John told Garrett, and all the other lyrics. Forever and Always; Parachute. It makes me cry everytime, and I was almost crying by the end of this.. It was amazing writing..

WHY MUST YOU MAKE ME CRY!