Fairy Frerard - Comments

Hmmm.
This story seems interesting, I like the fairy idea, it's unique and I've never heard of this idea being used.
I do have some pointers though... If you really want to attract readers... Put descriptive details in it, make the chapters longer, really dig deep into the characters mind, let people know what they are thinking.. Don't rush things, it makes the story seem choppy and not well planned out...
The only way you will get comments and readers, you have to connect the characters to the readers,
You know what I mean??

I will continue to read this and subscribe, just to see where this is going. (:
xoxo

Talking unicorn! XD

I loved the last chapter XD HOLEY SH*T Frank and Gerard...?

O.o

xoxo
Vampiyah

Update soon:3
I wanna read abou Mikey riding a Unicorn while wearing a shirt that says 'Wanna Hug My Unicorn'(I have a shirt like that) XDD

i would love you forever if u changed the font color ... i cant read it :3 sowy

AWWWW Frankie is sooooo cute when he gets embarrassed :D
update soon :D

Storm is awesome. She rocks.

This seems really cute, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

OMGee! i'm gonna read it now :)

Hmm...This seems interesting. I like the idea of fairies very much :D
Update.

~Pansy Xo

YaaaaaaY a Hedgy. Woooo

Well, I can see this story being interesting. The idea of fairies is laughable, but if you take it seriously then it'll be a great story. You need to improve on your grammar. Most people like stories with some sort of fluff and you said you keep seeing the same thing. Them thinking of each other as sexy at first sight makes you a hypocrite. It doesn't really develop their characters either. Gerard also seems too shy to be openly homosexual.

Nice I have not read one like this. Its off to a great start can not wait for more :)

I like this. It's very keeewl.
Keep it up.

this is cute :D

i love this i will keep reading :D
update soon :D

What a pity no one is commenting. VAMPIYAH APPROVES!!