fuck, I hope you're okay .-. This was cute ^^ I went abroad recently, which is why i've haven't commented in a while, but I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! :)
Your is really nice. It's not too cluttered and it goes well with the story. I'm personally not a big fan of "angel" stories, but yours is very nice. The descriptions are phenominal; I felt like I was right there. The only thing I'd fix is the spacing in the paragraphs. Some of them are in block and I'm pretty sure that's against the rules. :)