Holy shit on a Popsicle stick this is too amazing Wow I'm dying to see what will happen next The dad thing was obvious in a classic way, but how it all pan out?! I'm dying here, you gotta give me more, if the whole thing was written I'm sure I would finish this within a day! patiently waiting for your next update!! It makes me smile when you do so please update soon!(:
OMG i cannot believe u left it there!!! loved it! cant they see that her parents were probsbly merpeople and that she id royalty grr pretty please update ASAP need yo know what happens next!! XD
Well that was amazing, you know as usual, ahahaha YOU ALWAYS LEAVE ME AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! (; Pleaaaaaaaase update soon, I literally fist pumped and shouted yes when I saw you had updated, dying to know what will happen next!
Holy shit she's a mermaid :0 I never one believed he didn't like her, but this just takes it to a new level! YOU'RE TOO AMAZING IT'S RIDICULOUS I'm so excited for the next chapter ahhhh Good cliffhanger, youre leaving me at the edge of my seat here!
aaah <3 amazing updates!! gah, I am loving this story. When Disney movies were mentioned, I could've sworn that you were going to say she watched The Little Mermaid :P But I guess that would be too obvious
FUCK YEAH HE KISSED HER! Boom boom boom! okay that was amazing I'm going to be sad until the next update AHHH that was so good You are the Shiz This is da bomb I need to calm down Cliffhanger much? You're killin me(; ahahahhahaha sucha good update you're amazing. end of my little story here