Behind the Mask - Comments

Comment swap brought me heereee, and jeez am i glad! This story is AMMAZINGGG. I freaking love this, you dont understand. There were no grammar errors, and i didnt see any spelling ones either, your layout is realllly cool. The summary definitely had me hooked right away. I love it haha, cant say it enough. cx Keep Writing Babe xxX

Comment swap brought me heereee, and jeez am i glad! This story is AMMAZINGGG. I freaking love this, you dont understand. There were no grammar errors, and i didnt see any spelling ones either, your layout is realllly cool. The summary definitely had me hooked right away. I love it haha, cant say it enough. cx Keep Writing Babe xxX

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I’m SO glad comment swap brought me here I love Spiderman. So, I really like the background, I always mention the background cos if it’s too glary and clashy my eyes go funny and i get distracted. Anyways, I really like the characters and the plot and your use of short paragraphs, some people think its bad but its easier to read. Great work and I’m gonna subscribe cos I’m eager to find out what happens next! =)

AH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SPIDER MANNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's my favorite too!!!!!!!!IM gonna see the new movie today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANYWAY this story is awesome!!!!!!! I am definately going to check back with this one! :D THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3

I love this story so much! This is the first spiderman fanfiction I've come across and I am not disappointed! Spiderman always was my favourite superhero and for someone to finally write a fanfic on him instead of the others is refreshing, keep it up!

SPIDERMAN! YES! I have been looking for a good Spiderman fiction for awhile, and now I found one that I will most deffinetly continue to read. And I agree with bowtiesarecool. Peter is amazing...anyway... Usually when writers try to right about a super hero, or something they are portrayed horribly. I shall be checking back a lot for updates! This is really good! Spiderman forever. For some reason, when I think Spiderman, I think sour patch kids, when I think sour patch kids I think mountin dew. Three of my favorite things ever!

SPIDERMAN! YES! I have been looking for a good Spiderman fiction for awhile, and now I found one that I will most deffinetly continue to read. And I agree with bowtiesarecool. Peter is amazing...anyway... Usually when writers try to right about a super hero, or something they are portrayed horribly. I shall be checking back a lot for updates! This is really good! Spiderman forever. For some reason, when I think Spiderman, I think sour patch kids, when I think sour patch kids I think mountin dew. Three of my favorite things ever!

This story is amazing... keep up the awesome work xx :). Please update soon. Oh and I hope you like the movie.

I love the way you write Peter. It's so close to the film- even though you said you haven't seen it yet. I can't wait for the next update!

Im officialy stalking the updates for this story now :D Love it update soon.

I think I need to cry, I just ... no .... words. I LOVE SPIDERMAN and you have to go and write a fic now im addicted. I love this ive been awaiting the new spiderman movie and then I find this fic and ive gone into full on spidey mode :D Keep updating I need more :)

The lovely world of comment swap brought me here. So let me begin:

1) I never in my life thought i would read a spiderman story. But hot diggity damn, this is good. Really good i'm so hooked i wouldn't care if he actually was spider man.

2) You didn't just jump into things with hey i'm spider man but you didn't just have it non-existant. the thing I really like is the fact that you have a real person, with real problems dealing with greif and regret and her problems. It's not some petty problem it's a real problem and she's doing what she thinks best.

3) I love that you're giving us spiderman in the background it's not about him, she's not really falling head over heels at the sight of him, she's thinking she's with the right guy (a.k.a. the man i love to hate greg) when in reality he's just bringing her down.

4) you're making me pick a character to root for, which is a great thing so many stories have you just sitting there not sure who you want to root for so i commend you on having a character that I can cheer for, hate and one that i'm not sure about but like anyways.

5) With this, don't quit writing it. Because you'll find people who like the story as well as people who are not even spiderman fans who will like this story. Because let me tell you your writing is pretty good and this story isn't all about spiderman.

You'll be seeing a lot more of me.
-S

Hey, a Spiderman story! I don't see many of these on here :o
Lol so I'm subscribing and like the story so far (:
Keep it up!

Like this story so far!!! Update soon

OOOOOOOOoooooo first comment ehe :) im really looking forward to this story