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  • shasha24

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    I can't really cope with that ending. Its so sudden. I just don't understand the sudden turn of events of how all the kidnappers died.
    August 21st, 2012 at 01:35am
  • yellowjellybean14

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    great story horrible ending. i do not mean to be rude but I was disappointed in this chapter.
    August 13th, 2012 at 02:25am
  • lollipop102

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    *Drops to knees dramictically* NooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOooooooo!!
    August 13th, 2012 at 02:13am
  • demon-tears89

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    DAMN! I did not see that coming. That was one of the most original endings i've read in a loooong time. Awesome job :D
    August 12th, 2012 at 09:20am
  • aureanephthys

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    Holy shit... I was just mindblown/
    August 12th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • october-ninja

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    At first I was like OH SHIT JOHNNY THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU MATT
    Then I was like NOOOO BRIAN!!!!
    Then I was all NOT JIMMY!!!!
    But then the Matt Zacky thing and I was like me gusta. And he shot him then killed him self I was like romantic tragedy
    But at least Veronika's free I really liked this story
    August 12th, 2012 at 03:20am
  • shortygirl

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    Well I wasn't expecting it to end like this but i liked reading it
    August 12th, 2012 at 03:13am
  • Starlit

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    i think she is suicidal. I don't agree with suicide or anything but if she attempted it matt might feel even worse and might slow down a bit (just a suggestion) x
    July 9th, 2012 at 04:53pm
  • october-ninja

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    NOOOO you can give up on life now you just cant
    July 8th, 2012 at 07:31am
  • mistery gurl

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    i think hes not imagining things, i hope he stays there for her, not in a love interest way, but kind of to look after her, because i think matt doesnt have the self control, and could do the same again
    July 8th, 2012 at 07:11am
  • shortygirl

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    No!! he shouldn't have shoved the thoughts away....
    July 8th, 2012 at 07:09am
  • lollipop102

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    I think she's become suicidal ... Maybe so, maybe not. Can't wait for more.
    July 8th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • october-ninja

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    Veronika will never be broken
    and Matt your right you are monster because you cant even see that not only the rape but everthing your doing is wrong
    June 24th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • andrea weekes

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    a monster will always be a monster....so no surprise that he didnt change...but,,,how is veronika??
    June 16th, 2012 at 03:03am
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    a monster will always be a monster....so no surprise that he didnt change...but,,,how is veronika??
    June 16th, 2012 at 03:03am
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    a monster will always be a monster....so no surprise that he didnt change...but,,,how is veronika??
    June 16th, 2012 at 03:03am
  • lollipop102

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    I'm kinda not surprised he didn't change. Anyway, pkaes add more, I love this story
    June 15th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • mistery gurl

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    i hope the guys give him a hiding
    June 15th, 2012 at 03:14am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    :( He better make it up to her damn it
    June 15th, 2012 at 03:08am
  • none1

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    That would break just about any woman, but I donno about her.
    June 15th, 2012 at 03:03am
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