Nicht zu brechen (The Refusal to Break) - Comments

I can't really cope with that ending. Its so sudden. I just don't understand the sudden turn of events of how all the kidnappers died.

great story horrible ending. i do not mean to be rude but I was disappointed in this chapter.

*Drops to knees dramictically* NooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooOOOOOooooooo!!

DAMN! I did not see that coming. That was one of the most original endings i've read in a loooong time. Awesome job :D

Holy shit... I was just mindblown/

At first I was like OH SHIT JOHNNY THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU MATT
Then I was like NOOOO BRIAN!!!!
Then I was all NOT JIMMY!!!!
But then the Matt Zacky thing and I was like me gusta. And he shot him then killed him self I was like romantic tragedy
But at least Veronika's free I really liked this story

Well I wasn't expecting it to end like this but i liked reading it

i think she is suicidal. I don't agree with suicide or anything but if she attempted it matt might feel even worse and might slow down a bit (just a suggestion) x

NOOOO you can give up on life now you just cant

i think hes not imagining things, i hope he stays there for her, not in a love interest way, but kind of to look after her, because i think matt doesnt have the self control, and could do the same again

No!! he shouldn't have shoved the thoughts away....

I think she's become suicidal ... Maybe so, maybe not. Can't wait for more.

Veronika will never be broken
and Matt your right you are monster because you cant even see that not only the rape but everthing your doing is wrong

a monster will always be a monster....so no surprise that he didnt change...but,,,how is veronika??

a monster will always be a monster....so no surprise that he didnt change...but,,,how is veronika??

a monster will always be a monster....so no surprise that he didnt change...but,,,how is veronika??

I'm kinda not surprised he didn't change. Anyway, pkaes add more, I love this story

i hope the guys give him a hiding

:( He better make it up to her damn it

That would break just about any woman, but I donno about her.