Uh oh, my guess is the whole machine thing isn't going to be good. Marc's a good friend. can't wait to read more!!
March 24th, 2008 at 03:10am
Not Quite the World as We Know It! - Comments
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o no! what happened? whats wrong? i wanna know!March 24th, 2008 at 01:37am
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^Sure thing. :cute:March 23rd, 2008 at 03:14pm
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Well then i suppose you'll help me sis ;)- What's in a name?:
- You should edit the layout, bro. It’s hard to read with the pic behind the text. Especially where it’s white. White on white isn’t the best combo. :XD
A lot of people on here won’t read you story if he layout looks messy. Just a tip. ^^
Doing well so far by the way. Not bad at all for your first story on here. :cute:
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Marc's cool! Can't wait to find out what happens next with the treatment!March 21st, 2008 at 06:42pm
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You should edit the layout, bro. It’s hard to read with the pic behind the text. Especially where it’s white. White on white isn’t the best combo. :XD A lot of people on here won’t read you story if he layout looks messy. Just a tip. ^^
Doing well so far by the way. Not bad at all for your first story on here. :cute:March 21st, 2008 at 03:50pm -
pretty amazing. I really enjoyed reading this. it's very well written.March 20th, 2008 at 05:47am
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Creepy....but good! I liked it lots!
Keep writing more ^_^March 20th, 2008 at 04:00am -
That was so good!
It's enough to send a shiver up my spine :PMarch 20th, 2008 at 03:19am -
I like the story alot, you should write more...And soon:]March 20th, 2008 at 03:19am
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i'm liking this story. you should totally write more!March 20th, 2008 at 02:20am
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gah! i like it.March 20th, 2008 at 02:19am
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ahhhhh
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i like this...March 20th, 2008 at 02:13am -
I like it!! It seems very interesting and I can't wait to read more!March 20th, 2008 at 01:51am
