Endlessly - Comments

Okay, I'm really enjoying this. Nicole is very likeable and I'm enjoying her character so far. You write her so well.
Not to mention that I absolutely love that you are keeping close to the book. I love just about any HP story that does that. Plus you are keeping the characters in character which makes it that much more enjoyable to read.
Bottom line is I'm subscribing and I can't wait for an update. :)

I love this story so far! Can't wait for the next update!

I enjoy the communication between everyone you write their characteristics quite well :)

Lovely. Update soon.

The first chapter was intriguing. The second chapter was exciting. I loved them. I love the British humor in it, too! So funny! I'll read and comment again when I read the other chapters. :D

I love that you make her normal. It's such a refreshing change. You're doing wonderfully.

I like this story, a lot actually. I really do hope you update soon.

Really like it (: update again soon ta

This story is Si good, even though nothing exciting has happened I like all the detailed writing it is very important in a story and you capture everyone's.emotions greatly. I feel like nicole is hiding something though haha

I really like this. It's left me quite curious over why Malfoy is trying so hard to be around her, and why she is in Slytherin.
It's fairly accurate; the only thing that's a problem is a Ravenclaw wouldn't be in their Care of Magical Creatures lesson.

Hi! i have no clue where its going but i like it so far! my only advice, if you'd take it, is to maybe find a more interesting way to end the chapter. i like where you ended it generally but maybe you might stop on "I'm a Slytherin." and express her anxiety over their reactions...i don't know, just the way you ended it with "The only one who didn't react was Luna, who continued to flip through her magazine" (not an exact quote) didn't really sit well with me.
i sound like a total snobby bitch. I promise i'm not, i just love a good cliffhanger. I really do like it though. If i didnt i wouldnt have subscribed :) update soon maybe?