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  • HopeNeverFails

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    This was amazing. I got to the end and was bummed there wasn't more. You really took that song and embodied it in your entry. And I love how you did it backwards. The sorrow he felt was really justified and magnified by the memory at the end. It really showed the reader what he had lost. Awesome job, Jewel.
    February 13th, 2012 at 05:33pm
  • BecauseItsTheCup

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    I loved it! I was crying at the end! I was wondering if you would ever consider writing a full-length Carey Price story? I feel as though he just doesn't get enough credit. :)

    P.S. Can you tell Price is my favorite? (Check out my avatar)
    February 13th, 2012 at 09:04am