I don't know much about MCR, but it still sounds like a random 13-14 year old writing than the lead singer of MCR. I just don't get that vibe that you are that character too much.
Ugh, why do I always have to come out sounding like the asshole?
Gee? What the hell?! I LOVE this!!! More, please. I don't think Gerard actually feels like this... "Being surrounded by fans makes me feel like I'm not going through it alone." ~Gerard Way