Element of Fire - Comments

Love the new chapter!! Haha, so they find out that she is going to be hunted down by other monsters that are more or less worse and the best thing they can come up with is to separate. Nice. Haha. They better start listening to her opinion though. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!

She fought off the scary monster. Haha. Little jacked up how it turned into her brother though. At least she wasn't stupid enough to fall for his trap. Love the chapter. Update soon!!

That's a love triangle, and its one she doesn't even want to be apart of it. haha. I can't wait to read more so update soon!!!

She acts like its just the end of the world too. That to me is so funny. At least she knows she's loved though. :D can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!! XD

Its like that when I meditate. It kinda sucks when you had a busy day and then you try to meditate but then you think about EVERYTHING that happened that day. There is now way to focus on any of the chakras. But anyway, can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!

Awesome Update> :D Can't wait to read more soon!!

I Love the story. It is very interesting, can't wait to read more. Update soon!

hi there NegroLeo, i just read your story Element of Fire and i really enjoyed it. :) it makes me want to read more and see what's going to come next XD please update soon!!! <3