Out of the Wreckage - Comments

  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    I wonder where Jordan is and what happened to her... I think she's like out of state taking pictures or something... I wonder what Jake is going to do and what Zack wanted to talk about... I'm just excited to see what will happen next. I'm liking the fast updates by the way! keep 'em coming! :)
    August 28th, 2012 at 07:40pm
  • Sophia Rayne

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    YAY! I love this. I want to see how it all plays out sooo bad. Especially with Jack knowing.
    August 26th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    I really like that idea of the past and present :)
    Oh and zacks Idea of cheating I think is kinda stupid but In a weird way I kinda get what he means...
    Can't wait for more <3
    August 26th, 2012 at 09:22pm
  • hachie

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    I believe Zack is cheating on Bailey! His definition of cheating is complete and utter BS!!!!It's still cheating if he engages in some sort of sexual intercourse even though it's a few kisses or blowjobs from other faceless girls he meets. He suppose to stay faithful meaning that no other girls are suppose to touch and vice versa! But I guess the constant callings and texts from Bailey is getting to him and he needs some sort of release. But I still believe he is a complete asshole! Hell yes Jordan has had enough of his bipolar attitude her and she won't let him touch her again and then turn cold toward her. So the next chapter will be in the present???? X3 I am so excited for the next update! I look forward to it!
    August 26th, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    Something tells me that on some level Zack still has feelings for Jordan , but just doesn't want to admit that they're there.. Maybe because it's so wrong and that the right thing to do would be to choose bailey. Maybe that's why Zack stopped hanging out with her earlier.. to stop the feelings from resurfacing(if they were even there) I guess that all just came to e at once.. haha. Update soon! I love this story!
    August 26th, 2012 at 07:02pm
  • FlyingBirdd.

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    Love it love it love it! More
    August 24th, 2012 at 08:01pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    Your third person is great :D
    Can't wait for more <3
    August 24th, 2012 at 10:02am
  • hachie

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    I do believe you are doing an excellent job writing in third point of view! So she has made one friend that she can stand well at least she has someone and not completely alone. I love her roommate already! I wonder if Zack is still with Bailey, guess we'll find out later in the story!
    August 24th, 2012 at 03:57am
  • Sophia Rayne

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    Yay! Love this.
    August 24th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    so happy for the update :] you do know that is in all italics right? you probably know that but I was just curious why?
    August 24th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    Wow, that update was... quick...lol. The story seems like it's leading somewhere... I just don't know where yet..lol. I don't write in third person.. like ever... but a lot of stories I read are in third person. Honestly, I didn't even notice tthe difference..(That's a good thing,lol )
    August 24th, 2012 at 02:38am
  • Beccathecookie

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    I'm so pumped for this you have no idea xD I adore the idea of her buying Zacks bass, curious to see how his gf fits into this though (my brain has died and forgotten her name, I'm ashamed of myself right now) that is if she's even still in the picture xD
    Sounds like you have this planned out already, so I'm excited :') the third person is in my opinion a lot easier to read, I feel like when I write in first the word "I" becomes really overused :3
    August 24th, 2012 at 02:35am
  • My Wayward Son

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    hey, i just wanted to thank you for recommending "out of the wreckage"; it means a lot! i'm going to start posting there pretty soon.
    July 20th, 2012 at 02:55am
  • Sophia Rayne

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    I. Am. So. Friggin. Excited!
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:01am
  • tasteofgrain

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    Can't wait for it to start!
    June 6th, 2012 at 06:53pm
  • hachie

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    I am so excited for this story to start!
    And also excited to how the prequel ended and where this story will start!
    Just seeing the layout has got me so thrilled to know what happened between Zack and Jordan.
    I can't wait for the first chapter to be out!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 15th, 2012 at 04:27am
  • heyJAYhey

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    can't wait!!
    February 15th, 2012 at 03:59am
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    I'm excited!! :)
    February 15th, 2012 at 03:51am
  • outrage94

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    Awww start the story!! :)
    February 12th, 2012 at 09:09am