A Cry Of Vengeance - Comments

Please update again soon. Please?!?

the sex scene was not as bad as you think it is...it was pretty good....i loved Alex's reaction to Saphire being raped..."Fuck the fucking gun I'll kill him with my bare fucking hands!" excellent line! can't wait for the next chapter!

The sex scene is definitely not as bad as you think it is. Could've had a little more to it, if I'm honest, but it was still pretty good considering that you don't write a lot of sex scenes. I'm still curious to know what your plans with Alex are. I could see him trying to take matters into his own hands, maybe going to Zack to get some information. I hope he at least tries to keep an eye on Sapphire because Zack's going to find it hard to do himself since he's not with her 24/7. She's going to get herself into trouble, I can feel it. Great update! :)

I thought you did good with the sex scene.

I think Zacky is gonna find it difficult protecting Sapphire (especially fom herself). I hope she doesn't do something that'll put her in more danger. I wonder if Alex will help her track this Jeremy arsehole? Please update soon

please please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! So, is Alex Varkatzas only going to play a little role or a big role? i love the whole relationship between ZV and Saphire...and i was totally disgusted by the music teacher/stalker...poor ZV and poor Saphire!! cant wait to read the next chapter!

this story is going so great!!! i'm only on chapter 6 but i can't stop reading!! seriously!!!! love love love it!! her mom is such a effing bitch!!! geez!!! i definitely see some zacky romance happening soon!!

I forgot how intense this story had gotten. It has been WAY too long since you last updated. Sapphire's kind of turning over to the dark side now. I don't blame her, that guy's fucking scary, but I'm scared she's going to end up getting arrested or even going so far as to put herself in more danger because she goes looking for the guy. Moving wouldn't be a bad idea, but even then, they could still be followed. Zack needs to keep a closer eye on her before she does something stupid, which she very well may do now that she's got a gun. And Varkatzas?! :O Like in Alex Varkatzas? Does this mean he's actually going to become a character in this? God I hope so. Absolutely loved it! :D

Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating this. I love this story so much and I've really missed it. Looking forward to reading more. Please update again soon.

I'm really missing this story. I really hope you haven't abandoned it for good.

update soon please!!!

Hope u can update soon

I had the biggest smile on my face when I saw that this was a Zacky Vengeance story! I have to admit I would have absolutely no clue what I would do if I was i Saphire's situation, but I think you write her character really well! Ps, have fun at Download! xx

Me lovee<3

Hi loved the new chapter. Also at download if you see two girls that look like they go out but don't and call each other soul twin and also one I'd called skittles and the other shadows then you have found me and Darkbunny96

finally i understand the title :)

I couldn't imagine being in Saphire's position. But Zacky's trying to help her. I don't know if he's too happy with her planning on murder though. But I don't blame her for wanting to kill him. Loved the update! :D

Not the best choice in words Zacky..i just hope she stays

loved this

I love this! Just read it right through in one go. Poor Saphire! I hope that teacher gets what's coming to him!! Please update again soon :)

Her music teacher? Definitely wasn't expecting a teacher. Man he was definitely obsessed. Poor Saphire and Zack. That's provably going to mess with their heads for a while. Its a goos thing Matt showed up. Great update! :D