A Cry Of Vengeance - Comments

So Gena's gone? I kind of feel bad for her, knowing that Zacky cheated. There's not much she can do about it, but at least she warned Saphire about the kind of guys Zacky and Brian are so that she won't get hurt in the end. Too bad I have a feeling that that won't stop it from happening anyway. Loved the update!

I don't know whether I should hate Gena or not lol. I mean, sometimes she comes off as a bitch and then others she doesn't. I'm so confused. >< But the awkwardness of Saphire walking in on them fucking. Poor girl. Those two need to keep it in their pants. And now Saphire's getting jealous of Gena, but Zacky doesn't really see her that way. Or that's how he's acting anyway. I can't wait to read more! :D

love this!
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So maybe Gena isn't all that okay with Saphire staying with Zacky. But instead of pitching a fit, she's fucking Zacky constantly just to make Saphire know that Zacky is hers. They could be a little more considerate though. I mean damn, she couldn't sleep because of them. But Matt and Jimmy make up for that slightly in my opinion. XD Just because I love them. Great update! Can't wait for more!

Definitely surprised by the girlfriend, even if I should've seen it coming haha. But I love that you didn't make Gena throw a hissy fit about the fact that Sapphire is living with Zacky. Although the awkwardness of Gena and Zacky fucking within earshot of Sapphire makes up for that lol. And now she's all depressed because she just realized she doesn't have s chance in hell with him. Lived the update! :D

Her mom is a bitch. I hate her so much! >< But Zacky's so awesome. I love that he's actually really caring for her and not just like "have a room only because I feel bad for you." And Matt's so confident something's going to happen between them XD I loved it. But she was raped and almost murdered! O.O That definitely tells me that guy's going to find her, and Zacky will have to come to the rescue. I love love love this update! :D Can't wait for the next.

Sweet Jesus was her mum harsh. Talk about lack of maternal instinct.
I really enjoyed this :D
It's a great start! I'm glad he picked her up and let her stay.
I'm worried about what the blood was about. She either killed him or he was into blood play, which doesn't seem likely XD
Can't wait for more :D

I love that she gets to stay aomewhere now. I'm glad Zacky decided to let her stay because I doubt she'd be able to really do anything on her own. Can't wait for another update! :D

Love this please update soon

At least she managed to find a decent guy to give her a ride. I love that Zack's trying to help her out. She needs it. I can't wait for another. I'm in love with all your stories. ^.^

I love this story too! :D Her mom was a bitch for kicking her out though. Maybe less so for offering her money when she left but still. And now she's having to become a prostitute. Poor girl. Can't wait for more!