I Give You My Soul - Comments

I love how close Mandi and Arianna are..

@ elijah mikaelson
Aw thank you so much for your comment! I like how you went in depth about what you liked. Descriptive comments are by far the best. I'm thrilled that you like the story so far. =) Smut is awesome hahaha!

@ elijah mikaelson
Lol it's all good. Thank you so much for the comment and I'm glad you like it so far.

Sorry it took me so long to comment! I got caught up in The Avengers and every time I went to keep reading, I'd look at the tv and be like . Lol.

Anyway, I really like this. I love a7x co-writes. ^_^. Both of you are amazing writers, especially when it comes to the smutty scenes. Lol. I swear, I'm not a perv at all.

The idea you have going is also very mysterious and intriguing. I actually did not envision this when I read the summary, and that kind of thing is always great; how you can draw the reader in with a simple summary, and then completely blow them away with what you've actually got.

I must say, I was definitely pleasantly surprised with this story, and I can't wait to see what's to come!

@ synful_desires
Love you too girl and I'm glad you enjoyed the update :)

@ synful_desires
Aww luh you too dear! Glad you enjoyed the update!

Can't wait for this so expected ritual to happen; I see it'll be very bloody since the girls must kill one close person of them - I don't think they'll accept it easily. Arianna is already warming up to Matt and that's is a "FINALLY"!!! LOL Great chapter. Love you, girl! <3

Loved it. I'm glad that Matt came to his senses and didn't go running off to kill him, as it would have screwed everything up.

Yay! That chapter made me happy! I'm so glad that we are both working on this story again. ^_^
Hehehe I'm anxious to see how things pan out with that bastard Marcus lol. I've never liked him LOL. I love you lady and I'm gonna have to get down to writing the next update ASAP!

Brian why so cute and gentle???? WHY??? LOL He's a dream, seriously. Arianna is such a cock blocker!!!! Haahahha Or is you? How dare you stop in the mid of the action? It was getting so good and after a tiny hiatus, you should present us with some kinky fuckery!! LOL

I can't wait for the girls to discover what they really are and how they're gonna react with the news!!!! Great chapter as ever! ;) xoxo

Oh man, just when things were going so well for Brian he got blocked, but seeing Arianna in distress would be enough for her to go running.

I had to smile about how much of a gentleman Brian was being - he's still on his best behaviour :-)

@ shortygirl
Thanks lady!

So glad this is back but I think I'm gonna have to reread it because I don't remember much and I hope your mibba stops giving you trouble

@ xMandiblesx
No problem babe :) I kinda know what I'm going to do but I'm not 100% but I know I will come up with something super awesome! I love this story and I'm glad that it is going again.

@ Angelina Shadows
Thanks babe! I tried to leave it off where you could easily come in. Hehehe can't wait to read yours when you update. I still love this story a lot!

I loved it girl! It made me laugh when they went to Mandi's favorite restaurant and she was like "This is my favorite place to eat" and Brian whispers loudly " I know" and Mandi says "What did you say?" and Brian was like "Nothing...nothing. Shall we go eat" I don't know for some reason I found that funny. I love the part where she gave him head in the car I'm glad you decided to put that in but too bad it was interrupted. I love the new layout as well :)

Congrats on the baby

She's staying with a guy who treats her like shit...she needs to open her eyes

First thing first, congratulations about the baby, sweetie. :D Is it a boy or a girl? I'm so happy to see that now you're able to do the updates.

Once again Matt came to Arianna rescue, but I need to say she's acting a way too bitch for her own good, why stay with man who doesn't give a damn about her and now beats her; if she can have the gorgeous Matt?! XD She shouldn't have treat him that way, but I know it's all part of the drama, and I love drama so...
But I guess I'll read all the fic again to catch up the missing parts, because I really don't remember she and Matt had sex once. oO

OMG I'm jumping up and down of excitement! Finally an update, this fic is so great and I was missing so much! Bri is so cute! *-* The way he act when Mandi imply it was nothing but sex made a shit grin spread on my face. :D

I loved the update girl! Brian is such a sweetheart and I'm glad he saved Mandi from her asshole of a stepfather. You are such a great writer girl and I'm glad that you are writing again. I love you hun <3