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I really found your story short and sweet. Although I did find your layout quite plain; your layout should usually revolve around the plot of the story. Speaking of the plot I found it well written, beautiful, although you should really describe some things... more, or even just make your diction a little higher. I love your characters, and the development through such a short period of time in your story is very intriguing. I love it, and I still do... I might just read it again, for the fun of it. I love your writng style. Make another one!

Oh my goodness, I am crying. That's one of the sweetest things I've ever read. I LOVE this. Your descriptions were perfection. I love Lindsey and Laura and especially Joe because Joe reminds me of my boyfriend, who would do the whole favorite dinner and nervous proposal thing. AHH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.