Abduction - Comments

I feel sorry for Matt becuz he didn't ask to look for his daughter if anything Brian encouraged him to do well Brian u gof ur answer ur daughter Jasmine could possible be Matt's daughter and Jasmine doesn't want to be so now what's goin to happen now Jasmine is goin to hate Matt forever and I feel so sorry for Matt becuz he didnt ask for all this and I understand where Jasmine is coming from but she shouldn't have to act all bratty towards Matt becuz he didnt ask for this to happen so the fact tht she is being a brat makes me upset towards her becuz she is being just plain rude to Matt, callin him a monster in her nightmare thts rude and mean.....I hope karma bites her in the ass as much as I don't want it to but becuz of her attitude towards the situation I hope karma bites her in the ass.......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Even though I commented on the old one, I'll comment on this one too lol. I still feel bad for Matt, it's not like he planned for all of this to happen. I understand why she's acting the way she is though, I just feel bad for him. Keep it up, can't wait for more

good so far i'm sorry to hear about it. i hope u get well soon

This situation is hard on Brian, Matt and Jasmine becuz Jasmine is goin to be torn between Matt and Brian, Brian and Matt are goin to be torn in their friendship....can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Sorry for ur loss take ur time

First off let me say, I am so sorry for your loss. That can't be easy.

Second, poor Brian, this whole situation must be hard for him. Can't wait for more, take your time with the updates too =)

First off let me say, I am so sorry for your loss. That can't be easy.

Second, poor Brian, this whole situation must be hard for him. Can't wait for more, take your time with the updates too =)

Brian took that better then i thought he would. I was expecting chairs flying across the room

Didn't think tht woman was goin to follow Matt to Jasmine's party and thn cause drama at her party....what I don't get is y is Brian in denial he knows tht Jasmine could possibly be Matt's daughter so the fact tht u r getting butt hurt about it is stupid this wouldnt have happen if u simply told Jasmine tht she was in an ophranage before u and Michelle adopted her when she was 3....I understand thts its hard to accept the fact tht ur daughter is possibly ur best friend's daughter but u need to understand tht ur best friend's daughter was taken away from him before he even had a chance to see her once she was born soo the fact tht u r being selfish by keeping Jasmine to urself and not wanting to give her back to ur best friend just shows how much u truly care about ur friends.....if anything she should decide who she wants to live with grant it I'm positive tht she is goin to choose Brian over Matt becuz Brian did raise her all her life but it's not fair to Matt know tht the daughter he has been looking for wont come home with him and on top of tht this lady should explain everything to Brian, Michelle and Jasmine what happen tht night the day Jasmine was born and also show them proof tht Matt is Jasmine's father by doing a DNA test and also prove tht Michelle's parents did pay her to take the baby away.....so much drama for a 16 yr old....I'm sure tht Matt isn't going to be coming around Brian's house now after this event is over with......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Didn't think tht woman was goin to follow Matt to Jasmine's party and thn cause drama at her party....what I don't get is y is Brian in denial he knows tht Jasmine could possibly be Matt's daughter so the fact tht u r getting butt hurt about it is stupid this wouldnt have happen if u simply told Jasmine tht she was in an ophranage before u and Michelle adopted her when she was 3....I understand thts its hard to accept the fact tht ur daughter is possibly ur best friend's daughter but u need to understand tht ur best friend's daughter was taken away from him before he even had a chance to see her once she was born soo the fact tht u r being selfish by keeping Jasmine to urself and not wanting to give her back to ur best friend just shows how much u truly care about ur friends.....if anything she should decide who she wants to live with grant it I'm positive tht she is goin to choose Brian over Matt becuz Brian did raise her all her life but it's not fair to Matt know tht the daughter he has been looking for wont come home with him and on top of tht this lady should explain everything to Brian, Michelle and Jasmine what happen tht night the day Jasmine was born and also show them proof tht Matt is Jasmine's father by doing a DNA test and also prove tht Michelle's parents did pay her to take the baby away.....so much drama for a 16 yr old....I'm sure tht Matt isn't going to be coming around Brian's house now after this event is over with......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Didn't think tht woman was goin to f

sound good keep going hun. i love it

Oh crap. I feel so bad for her because the life that she knew is being turned upside down. I cannot wait to see what's going to happen. Keep it up! =)

Drama has offically started. I can't beleiev that lady did that on her birthday. I get Matt would want his daughter but not the day when she's truely happy

Sorry for not commenting lately on the chapters I have been busy wit college it's stressful.....anyhoo I'm loving what has been goin on lately in the last couple of chapters there has been some drama, Logan liking Jasmine, a possibility tht Jasmine could possible be Matt's daughter, Brian is willing to fight the biological parents tht tries to come back and take Jasmine away from him, Jasmine has a thing for one of the band members in Black Veil Brides (had to think about the band's name) and now we know what happen tht night when Val was giving birth to Jasmine even tho tht wasn't her name until the nurse took her away tht night sooo yea question did Val die after giving birth becuz the lady said tht Val was in so much pain and losing a lot of blood soo did she die tht night...........can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Sorry for not commenting lately on the chapters I have been busy wit college it's stressful.....anyhoo I'm loving what has been goin on lately in the last couple of chapters there has been some drama, Logan liking Jasmine, a possibility tht Jasmine could possible be Matt's daughter, Brian is willing to fight the biological parents tht tries to come back and take Jasmine away from him, Jasmine has a thing for one of the band members in Black Veil Brides (had to think about the band's name) and now we know what happen tht night when Val was giving birth to Jasmine even tho tht wasn't her name until the nurse took her away tht night sooo yea question did Val die after giving birth becuz the lady said tht Val was in so much pain and losing a lot of blood soo did she die tht night...........can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Drama has offically hit the fan. Well this is gonna be an awkward birthday party

this is a very interesting story and I love it. I have a feeling a lot is going to go down if Jasmine is Matt's daughter.

Can I make a suggestion? The story is great and I would change a thing, except for the number of times you use terms of endearment. Too many of them can get annoying and even lose their effect. Just a suggestion. Keep up the great work =)

Logan needs to get over himself and just tell her. There's gonna be alot of drama if Jasmine is Matt's daughter

Well Jake sure moves fast doesn't he? Logan is offically pissed

hmm nice i wronder when matt gonna find out about his daurther, i love this story keep it up