Wild Things. - Comments

Sexy huh? xD hehe.. So because her pregnancy is different from Bella's they are suddenly doubting her person? That's mean. They should know her better than that.. Hmm.. I wonder if the suspected powers she will have as a vampire is the reason her pregnancy is the way it is. Hmm... I also wonder what jack will say to and about the whole bracelet/Elliot thing.. Hmmm.. Many wonders about this. Thanks for the the whole A/N, that was a different experience I must say. Good chapter.

Hmm.. Jack's point of view on things. I wonder if she will accept a date with Paul after the bets timeframe is up... Or maybe not. I also wonder what her great revenge will be! And what about that teacher dude.. I'm thinking that he's not done in the story yet. But I'm not sure. Not yet at least. I wonder how this pregnancy thing will go. Good chapter.

Yay I'm loved and awesome banner! I like it a lot! Anyways, so she's pregnant with Carlisle's child, but the pregnancy isn't like the one bella had. Hmm.. Well that will be interesting. Maybe one of powers (I'm guessing she has multiple, since they are both going to be so powerful when turned) might have something to do with it. Maybe she can have a sort normal pregnancy even with a vampire?? Idk, haut a crazy idea probably. Hmm.. Can't wait to see what you guys have planned for this. Good chapter.

They are all so freaking cute and adorable. I'm jut wondering how long this peace will last for them. How Carlisle and Enza will be when they come home, if Enza is right about something bad happening after telling him she loves him and what jack will do to deny Paul. I don't think she can for much longer. She has said and done too much already for that. I just wonder how things wil be when they come back home. Good chapter.

Finally! That took way to long.. Well maybe not. But I'm just a bit inpatient on that front. I like how cadenza and Marcus seem to be best friends or something like that. It seems like something they both needed. At least right now. I wonder how long jack can resist Paul's charm. Maybe Italy will work wonders for them too?? Good chapter and congrats on the chapter thing. As a reader I'm just glad it's still going

Yay!!!! They're back together! For good, maybe?

You might want to re-read this for mistakes. There were a couple and some more noticeable than others.

Uh! The friend card. That's pretty much a slap to the face right there. I wonder of Enza and Carlisle will get back together. They do love one another and we're happy together. Plus they are so cute when they are together. Hmm.. So Jack is falling for Paul's charm. I wonder how estatic he'll be when he finds out. They could be an awesome couple.. I think. I wonder if Jane and Felix are strictly there for the girls or if there is a hidden motive yet to be revealed.. Hmmm... Good chapter.

I'm dying!! Update pleaders!!!"/

Update plzzzzz!!! Love it!!

Patiently waiting for Carlisle and Enza to get back together! Love the story, by the way. :)

Important indeed! I wonder if/when she will tell him. What will happen in Italy, how jack and Paul are doing and stuff like that. What can I say? I'm simply curious and can't wait for even more

Great story! And I love that song haha

In thanksgiving? His can it be in thanksgiving? xD damn good chapter and I can't wait for even more. Especially if there is some Enza/Carlisle action!

This is good, but you really need to work on grammar, dialogue, and punctuation.

This is good, but you really need to work on grammar, dialogue, and punctuation.

I like it! I only read the first couple chapters but what I have read so far, I know that I'm gonna come back soon, and finish reading the rest. I like how descriptive your writing is. I also like how you have made the characters. I'm subscribed, and will be back to read more!!

Not a big fan of the twilight series. I like your story so far though. It is a bit confusing. There are a lot of things that are all over the place a bit. Also, you need to work on your punctuation. And personally, I'd like to get to know more about your main character, Enza. If that is the main character.
Other than that, keep up the good work :)

I like how descriptive you are with your writing. Although I think that there are some things to be worked on. Your writing doesn’t flow very well. It also seems like there are some parts missing. It may just be me. I’m reading the first chapter and I am having a hard time understanding what is going on. It is good from what I do understand though. :D

aww! sappy soap opera moment ftw! I wonder how things with Enza and Carlisle will work out.. and what will happen when Jane and Felix return to Italy.. if their is something real between Embry and Yvette and Leah and Sasha.... and a lot more that i can't think of again.. hmm.. can't wait for more ^.^

Gnomes? LOL. xD I can't wait to read about this finner thing and How this whole dating thing Will turn out for the vamps.. Hmm.. Can't wait for more ^.^