Fifteen - Comments

The fact that you started this with a Taylor Swift song in the description makes me love you. Oh, and this story :P Also, the opening sentence is fantastic. Something about it just made me smile, and it reminds me of when I turned fifteen. You're doing a really good job showing the resentment the main character has for her sister, too. This could definitely be easy to relate to to a lot of readers. I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED THE STAR SHADOWS. That is all :)

First of all, I have to say that it's a really good start. There's something about it that's really sweet and sentimental and it reminds me of being a little kid. The line 'when I was little as a night light' absolutely killed me. It was a beautiful comparison. Also the relationship between the main character and her sister is already really clear, which I think is really cool considering we haven't been introduced to Jennifer yet. Great job!

I love the banner! Good job! I know this may sound random but is this layout original??