Just A Dream - Comments

HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY, GORGEOUS!
Ohmy... yay for remission, holy shit for kidney failure...
My God, that sucks. I really hope they're able to find a donor...
Don't feel bad! If that's how you want the story to go, that's how it's gunna go. You shouldn't feel bad!
Update soon, love!

What the fuck? Now his organ is failing! Shit. I feel so bad for all of them. He develops cancers, goes to remission, then the cancer comes back, he goes on meds, gets remission again but now his kidney fails him. Jeez. They never get it easy do they?

HAPPY BELATED B-DAY!!! THANKS FOR UPDATING!!!

Happy Be-lated Birthday!!! :D
I hope everything is ok with Blair, I don't want his cancer to be worse or for him to have another problem. I'm glad that Brookie is getting to spend more time with Blair.

update soon please!! this is amazing!!!

All I have to say is THEY GOT TOLD!!
I wonder what will happen next.. O:

At first I thought this was yet another teenage story, but as I read more and more, you proved me wrong. Ammy is so depressed it hurts, but no wonder, I mean, the girl gets beaten and raped by that bastard and her mom doesn't even notice! The only thing I would change is the way her and Blair immediately connect like that, I mean, it sounds kind of weird that someone would trust a stranger like that. But she's fragile, so I guess she just needed someone to talk to, anyone. I didn't read all the chapters but I will. I wann Know what happens to her. Great job!

YES YES YES!!!!!!!! It was fantastic!

So fucking amazing! I love that bastard's funeral!! I was literally laughing.

First of all, it's beautifully written. You capture the emotions very well, and I see very few grammatical errors.

The summary was a little long, though. Good, but long. Maybe you could choose a select few lines that describe the story the best.

Also - I know I personally have trouble with this, too - it might be easier to read if you put a blank line in between paragraphs.

Your characters are...I don't know how to put it...alive. I can already tell Blair is really sweet, and it's easy to feel sorry for Am from the first chapter.

Very well written. Continue. :)

AWW YEAHHH THE MOTHERFUCKER IS FINALLY DEAD YES
You have no idea how happy I was when I read that.
You go Am! Travis deserved everything he got. And screw his mom, she has no right to call Am a liar.
Update soon, wonderful!

Wow. First of all, the summary was absolutely beautiful. It drew me in immediately, even in just the summary, because I had to know what was going on. At first I thought it was a wedding but then I realized someone had died, and then I knew I had to read.

I love Blair. He's so sweet, and so is his mom. If I was in Ammy's situation, I'd definitely want people that surrouding me. I really love how you made him and Ammy meet as well. I'm more of a fanfiction gal, so I'm used to whole "meeting at a concert or something" kinda thing, so this was definitely a nice breath of fresh air.

The torment and anguish in this story is so believable. Your writing style makes your characters and their emotions really just come to life, and I love that.

The only bit I'd change is the way you have your story formatted. There's supposed to be spaces between your paragraphs :)

all i can say is, "GETT IT GIRRRLLL!" you tell his momma!! Travis deserved what he got!

FUCK YES! TRAVIS IS FINALLY DEAD!!! She won't be charged, it was self-defense. And we all know it!

HELL YES! HE IS DEAD! I LOVE YOU FOR KILLING HIM !! IF SHE GET CHARGED FOR
MURDER I'LL PROBABLY THROW A TABLE.. But that's okay! BECAUSE TRAVIS IS DEAD!

YES!!!! It has taken me 3 days to read this... well worth it. I am subscribed and i'm GOING TO BED!!!!!!!! Ding Dong the DICK IS DEAD!

I really like this story s far. Given that im only on like... Chapter 4.. BUT STILL. I really do like it. xD I like the relationships that are forming so far. Theyre pretty awesome. I like Blair's mom. shes really sweet. I feel so bad for Amaryllis.. GAH. WHY DOESNT SHE TELL HER MOMMIE? but from comments below I guess she does! xDD Oh well. YAY STORY.

Oh, goodness, shit did go down.
Jeez.. lots of shit went down. I honestly didn't think any of them would go far enough to shoot him. I hope the asshole dies. And if he doesn't, for whatever reason, I hope he dies in jail. I hope he rots in hell c:
Update soon, beautiful!

Ooh gurl shit gon go doown!
I've always wanted to say that:3
Anyway, I didn't think he was gunna be too happy about that. He'll get over it eventually c:
Update soon, gorgeous!

I didn't think Blair would like that plan haha But hey, Ammy's right; it is the only way. And when Blair said "I can't live without you babe." and she was like "Yet Blair, you think I can live without you." (or something like that) haha Touche