I loved this story. It was a complete surprise to me because I had no idea you had even started it. I also cannot decide who I want her to pick... it's such a hard decision. The reason for that is, because like you, I fell in love with both Jordan and James.... Lottie should just clone herself so she can be with both. Why would you leave this decision up to us??? lol
I think I might go with James because there aren't many steamy stories about him like there are Jordan. But I would be really happy with either. =D
Awwww yeah! Seriously, girl. I love how you portray both characters. They're such smooth talkers. Jordan's a stud; Lottie's a player. Not only are they bound to have something happen between them, but there's also the promise of some Nealer action, as well. This story has everything my friend! Update soooooon! <333
Anyway, wow. <3 You already know I love the present tense. (And awkward Sid.) So this is me obsessing over the J.Staal hotness. I, for one, appreciate it. And I cannot wait for more, more, more.
Is that creepy?
I can't wait for other, um...subjects to get through into the mix. ;) (Like my attempt at avoiding a spoiler alert?) <3